You know what...I just read this on SkyeHawke 'cause of the funny title. It was good. However, I was waiting for the moment that Harry lets slip to the Diner's workers that Mr. Smith AKA. Bad Ass Snape (with no hair! BwaHaHa) was his teacher in school or was a double agent for the English Mafia or similar, just something about their shared past...But that's just me. It's probably more realistic that the past was not shared at that diner. All the characters were very focused on the present, they were focused on enjoying their second chances. The humor was there, and the descriptions of Harry coming to love the Arizona landscaping and playing soccer were my favorite parts. I thought the ending was just a tad bit abrupt; I wanted more of a description of the Arizona storm front.