Harry collapsed onto the couch in front of the fire, oblivious to the chaos around him. I kissed Ginny. And Luna. I kissed Ginny and Luna. And both of them know. And neither one thinks that's wrong.
Anita kisses more than one guy and everyone's okay with that.
I wonder if they'd let me kiss them both at the same time.
I'm doomed.
I absolutely loved the ending.
I can see how the chapter was "all over the place". It has the feel of a filler; there were things said that had to be said along with a little fun. It was something that paced the events of ch. 62 and what will more than likely happen in 64.
I'm better at writing in 3rd person and I don't think I could pull off the "Anita-point-of-view" as well as you have. She's a. . .strange(for lack of a better word) one. Now I'm feeling ever more sorry for Anita. Her, Nathaniel, and Harry need serious therapy.
I've been wondering, though, is Nathaniel's withdrawal from Anita having more to do with her not being able to protect him, or, because Anita got hurt because of him? Or is it some mixture of the two? Probably neither. Oh, well. Perhaps the next chapter shall alleviate some of my wondering.
Therapy for Everyone
I absolutely loved the ending.
I can see how the chapter was "all over the place". It has the feel of a filler; there were things said that had to be said along with a little fun. It was something that paced the events of ch. 62 and what will more than likely happen in 64.
I'm better at writing in 3rd person and I don't think I could pull off the "Anita-point-of-view" as well as you have. She's a. . .strange(for lack of a better word) one. Now I'm feeling ever more sorry for Anita. Her, Nathaniel, and Harry need serious therapy.
I've been wondering, though, is Nathaniel's withdrawal from Anita having more to do with her not being able to protect him, or, because Anita got hurt because of him? Or is it some mixture of the two? Probably neither. Oh, well. Perhaps the next chapter shall alleviate some of my wondering.