Well, I can see why this took you so long! Trying to walk both Anita and Nathaniel back from the ledges you put them on must have been a chore and a half.

Honestly, I'm comfy with it now, but my initial reaction was that it seemed a bit forced (the reasons for Nathaniel's angst and the plot device of the car radio used to ensure his continuing angst). But I've personally freaked out much worse over far less (and did so last night, in fact), and humans tend not to make sense. So it's definitely your call, and please don't hurt me!!! (cowers in fear of author's wrath)