The way I wrote this, I didn't plan for Daniel to know about the Reavers, but just the insane not-quite-human-but-too-damned-close noise was driving Daniel bonkers. It's just plain *wrong*
I was trying to be more lyrical in my writing. It's really the only way to describe such horrible things.
The chaos of the battle
It's very difficult to write a mass of things happening all at once. I tend to try and get as much in as short a space as possible, a paragraph on each, so the impact of the fight can be understood in a short space.
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The way I wrote this, I didn't plan for Daniel to know about the Reavers, but just the insane not-quite-human-but-too-damned-close noise was driving Daniel bonkers. It's just plain *wrong*
I was trying to be more lyrical in my writing. It's really the only way to describe such horrible things.
The chaos of the battle
It's very difficult to write a mass of things happening all at once. I tend to try and get as much in as short a space as possible, a paragraph on each, so the impact of the fight can be understood in a short space.