You amaze me. I love how you brought the crew through the Stargate. I've never seen that before. And the Mal/Inara scene was really sweet. I don't know the back story (from your point of view for this story) but I would hope that would get Mal off his ass and proclaim his love to Inara. I don't know how I feel if you were to take this to a Daniel/River ship. I can't really see that. With that said, you'll probably convince me whatever you do so...W00T FOR DANIEL AND RIVER!