I was stuck on how to make the sex scene not be cliched, and after a conversation we had about Anita's feeding the ardeur, I had to justify to myself how to have Anita in bed with Logan. It worked; her being more comfortbale with the ardeur and the lesser of two evils (sex with the guy who helped her fight in the bar, or one of the drunks in the bar?). Also the sense of awkwardness in her first One Night Stand.

Of course, this being me, it's going to get more complicated in the next chapter. But that's the fun part :)

Commas? I don't think so.

Hmm? Not too many, you mean?