ext_23379 ([identity profile] jaydeyn-sitari.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2006-09-05 03:55 am (UTC)


The 15/5 blend is still coming along, very strong, very well done. Having to cope with a five-year old's body when you're not used to it, must be hard. I love Anita's reactions and I hope she believes her on the being older part. Honestly didn't occur to me that the cuts were positioned there - huh. Doc Grey was a dirty old man demon.

I'm almost concerned, almost eager: is this a totally fresh start, or an adventure that can be resolved by her going home? *smiles* Pity it can't be both. I think Nathanial is EXACTLY who she needs - Anita can be the strong and protective type, no issue, but Nathanial would know how to be and probably wants to be a good father. I can't wait! *squee*

:)
Jaydeyn

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