ext_54400 ([identity profile] sabriel-0405.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2006-10-08 01:04 pm (UTC)

This was a fantastic chapter. Dawn's struggle to be both 5 and 15 was well played out. Nathaniel would make a wonderful father. The whole Richard thing was great.

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