You have Micah wrapping Dawn in a blanket twice. Hearing her say “My wrists are fine… and my throat hurts… and I’m cold,” twice was pretty funny though. :P
... well you've fixed it now, but it was there twice before.
Well, the telepathy is out of the bag now. Well, mostly. That first scene was crazy though, very creepy and such.
I miss you guy. - Missing plural, I’m guessing?
You're probably sick of hearing this but I'm a fan of your social worker. When you first had Dawn picking up on her nervousness, I laughed, because it's cute that dealing with an angry Executioner makes her jittery. And she wants the best for Dawn, which is nice. Still has the potential to be disasterous though, cuz you know, the road to hell is paved with good intentions. ... And cookies. Mmmm... cookies.
I wonder how they explained Anita's living arrangements to her though? " Anita: Nathaniel? Oh he's just our unncessarily, magnificiently attractive maid... who lives here... Micah: And also moonlights as a stripper. Anita: For which his hottness comes in handy. Micah: .... He's also great with kids. All: Not a threesome, not a threesome, not a threesome.... Social Worker: Mmmm, nice ass.... hm, what?
Dawn yelling at Richard = Love But I almost wish she had smacked him a bit with her journal. Wolfy jerk-face.
Nathaniel is the best housewife/big brother person ever. ::cuddles::
Long chapters = Love
And Dawn is criminally cute in this. It's mind-boggling.
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You have Micah wrapping Dawn in a blanket twice. Hearing her say “My wrists are fine… and my throat hurts… and I’m cold,” twice was pretty funny though. :P
... well you've fixed it now, but it was there twice before.
Well, the telepathy is out of the bag now. Well, mostly. That first scene was crazy though, very creepy and such.
I miss you guy. - Missing plural, I’m guessing?
You're probably sick of hearing this but I'm a fan of your social worker. When you first had Dawn picking up on her nervousness, I laughed, because it's cute that dealing with an angry Executioner makes her jittery. And she wants the best for Dawn, which is nice. Still has the potential to be disasterous though, cuz you know, the road to hell is paved with good intentions. ... And cookies. Mmmm... cookies.
I wonder how they explained Anita's living arrangements to her though? "
Anita: Nathaniel? Oh he's just our unncessarily, magnificiently attractive maid... who lives here...
Micah: And also moonlights as a stripper.
Anita: For which his hottness comes in handy.
Micah: .... He's also great with kids.
All: Not a threesome, not a threesome, not a threesome....
Social Worker: Mmmm, nice ass.... hm, what?
Dawn yelling at Richard = Love
But I almost wish she had smacked him a bit with her journal. Wolfy jerk-face.
Nathaniel is the best housewife/big brother person ever. ::cuddles::
Long chapters = Love
And Dawn is criminally cute in this. It's mind-boggling.