http://oportunemoments.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] oportunemoments.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2006-10-14 01:41 am (UTC)

Aw, Nathaniel... ::cuddles::

There was nothing she could, nothing she could say to him. -'do' after the first 'could'?

That was wonderful. I love how you do Anita's voice, and hearing it on this story was a nice interlude.

Other than that, awesome. Keep it coming
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