Uh-oh! Wow, poor Harry. Poor Remus. Poor everyone! At what point does Harry just go off and commit suicide -- or is he saving that for later, poor little Horcrux Boy? And Anita is REALLY going to be pissed at Dumbledore when she figures that out, assuming you included that bit of canon in your tale. She'll use language similar to Snape's, only more colorful. (By the way: Just as Snape couldn't bear to admit to anyone besides Dumbledore how he felt about Lily, he's not going to 'fess up that he might actually have come to care about Harry and his fate -- which is why he immediately kinda-sorta backtracks when Dumbledore calls him on it after a horrified Snape accuses Dumbledore of raising Harry up "like a pig for slaughter".)