http://rosy-the-cat.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rosy-the-cat.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2008-01-06 07:23 am (UTC)

There's a ship? Ooh! Bonus!

In my experience, last-minute afterthought/D'oh! additions to stories can make or break a good chapter, because either it'll come off as random or it'll be genius. There is no middle ground.

In any case, you clearly have earned a Winner's Cookie.

*hands Mhal a really BIG snickerdoodle*

-- Rosy

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