I'm always so happy when you return to the Stargate universe, and this was another admirable addition to your versions of it. Your Vala-voice continues to be wonderful - you have it nailed. The fic also seems to be getting closer to two things I have been waiting for gleefully with baited breath - the revelation of McKay, to both himself and Lorelai. And despite the fact that I anxiously await another installment of dawning light, this is keeping me more than occupied in the meantime! So, thanks for another wonderful chapter!
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