ext_358266 ([identity profile] thaichicken.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2009-09-05 09:15 pm (UTC)

+1 on the capturing-Abby's-voice thing, but this line absolutely made the piece for me: I must not call her Madam Director, Abby thought, her right hand curling into an involuntary M and her left to a D. Gibbs would have thought it was funny.

Great work! :)
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