This is perfect, and makes me want to watch every episode of NCIS with Ziva. A few thoughts on the Hebrew - when you have her say good by to Gibbs, Ziva says "Todah veShalom". I think she would say "Todah rabah vaShalom". "Todah rabah" is "thank you very much", and is a bit more formal/meaningful. Also, I've always pronounced the word for "and" "vah" instead of "ve", but that just maybe my accent.