I'm doing my best to explain Ziva in the narrative - she's the classic "skilled outsider" to NCIS, rather like Teyla on SGA (Ziva's english is good but she's lacking the colloquialisms through lack of exposure, she's rather deadly in a fight, and it's through her eyes we learn more about the other characters blah blah etc). Putting her on Atlantis is more of the same, only for the SGA characters. She's going to focus mostly on Sheppard because he's really the one everyone raises an eyebrow at :)

But, um, I go on.

I'm glad you liked the first installment :) This is the first time I've gotten a story finishes before posting, and it's a nice change. I can get mah edits in without kicking myself after the fact. I know it sounds like an obvious thing, but I'm still learning as a writer (that yes, editing = GOOD)