Oh, this is just wonderful! I've not read any fic from Ziva's POV before and you've captured (to me) her inner feelings and thoughts really well. I particularly like the way there's a sort of dreamy feel to the first part - it fits well with the way that she must feel as if it's all a nightmare that she can't wake from, particularly when she realises (she thinks) that she's to be sent on a terminal mission.

It's going to be fascinating to see Atlantis from a different viewpoint. I'll be interested to see your Ziva's list of 'things to be fixed'.

All in all it's very well timed for me: I've just today arrived home to find Season 3 of Atlantis on my doorstep! :-)