Oh my god, this fic is like heaven to me. Not only is it an amazing POV, but it's such an excellent crossover, seeing her slowly getting to know Atlantis and its inhabitants, seeing their take on her, and you're such a great writer, and I'm thoroughly in love with this piece. Also, everything you write about Ziva's departure from NCIS makes me want to cry.

And if you don't mind a teeny bit of concrit - she would say 'veShalom', not 'vaShalom'.