This is a wonderful story. I've read a few NCIS/SGA crossovers, and many of them are fun, but this is the only one that felt *plausible*. I love your portrayal of Ziva, and her perspective on Atlantis. Your Ducky is great too--all the hints of what lies beneath the surface. The characterizations are all spot-on, and the beginning of the story was masterful in its portrayal of Ziva's tension and Ducky's attempts to help her.