Oh, this is brilliant and your Ziva is fabulous. Seriously, one of the best Zivas I've read in NCIS fic, which is even more rare and unexpected in a crossover. You nailed all her quirks and sense of humor, and that more elusive loyalty and devotion to justice that let her work so well with Gibbs. And the badassery, of course ;) (she got five Wraith! Four with a knife! I love that bit)

I'm going to be laughing about the bunny slippers for weeks, oh man. Especially "Ziva hugs the slippers to her chest, knowing Sheppard will not voluntarily put his hands that close to her breasts unless he wants to die" and "Ziva holds her head high and sails out of the room in full possession of her bunny slippers, if not her sanity" (with Gibbs laughing in the background, bonus win!) And Abby and McKay, ahahaha WIN. (oh god, the fistbump). So much good humor in the entire story - I would quote more from earlier parts, but that would get very long :)

One thing I particularly want to congratulate you on was the plot. I love crossovers, and one of the hardest things to do right is merge the two worlds into a coherent plot, and you did an awesome job. All the character stuff in the emails made it easy to transition to DC, and you did all the characters justice in the transfer.

To conclude: so much love! Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go make my sister read it ;)