Excellent voices on everyone. I really liked how you treated the Tony/Ziva relationship. It felt real to me and while there was a bit of resolution there towards the end, it isn't fixed. A part of me was really glad about that and I'm not really sure why.
I liked the hints of McShep there and I ADORE your Lorne. Abby and McKay was awesome. Someone in the comments mentioned Abby/McKay/Sheppard and I would LOVE to read that. *nod nod*
This was such an interesting way to look at what happened after Jenny's death, at the split up of the team.
Incredibly well written, wonderfully engaging, great action scenes and heartbreaking moments between Tony and Ziva and with Gibbs.
I would love to read more in this 'verse, if you were so inclined.
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Excellent voices on everyone. I really liked how you treated the Tony/Ziva relationship. It felt real to me and while there was a bit of resolution there towards the end, it isn't fixed. A part of me was really glad about that and I'm not really sure why.
I liked the hints of McShep there and I ADORE your Lorne. Abby and McKay was awesome. Someone in the comments mentioned Abby/McKay/Sheppard and I would LOVE to read that. *nod nod*
This was such an interesting way to look at what happened after Jenny's death, at the split up of the team.
Incredibly well written, wonderfully engaging, great action scenes and heartbreaking moments between Tony and Ziva and with Gibbs.
I would love to read more in this 'verse, if you were so inclined.
Thank you for sharing it. :)