Can I be you when I grow up as a writer? Pretty please?

wow. absolutely frakkin brilliant writing just by itself and then the fact that you seamlessly integrated two shows in a beautiful way to deal with that dangling participle of an ending! Masterful. wow.

This is perfect...

Jack looked at her for a long moment. Then he said, "Do you trust me?"

Angela narrowed her eyes at him. "What kind of a stupid question is that?"

"The kind that you answer."

and this is SO Zack:

"I don't really understand why I'm here," Zack confessed. "Captain Harkness told me that they need someone who understands things, but a lot of people understand things."

Brilliant!

and you made me cry. I NEVER cry reading stories (ok almost never) my hubby cries, I dont... but you got me.

Shesh, look at me, all fan girl squwee and stuff. :)