The whole John/Rory thing is already driving me up the wall with giddiness (and insanity :D), but when you throw that whole Harry angle into, I think it makes my head explode. That was quite hot, while also being quite painful at the same time. So like real life is sometimes.
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Oh, and Ziva is always for the win, but somehow the way you write Lorne in the Agent Afloat verse always makes me like him more. Which is saying a lot, because I love Lorne to begin with.