ext_230754 ([identity profile] sparrow015.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2005-04-15 05:09 am (UTC)

I loved it!!! Now, should Harry mention someone can go insane from that curse and will he get a big old guild trip and try and run away. XD

Oh, I noticed this on one of the lines...just one mis-spelled word, I'm not sure if yer gonna change it or not, but I thought you should be aware.

"You take Jason and Jamil, having Shang-Day drive," Richard said distractedly as he tried to shift Anita's weight in his arms. "Graham will drive me and Anita and Harry."

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