ext_63096 ([identity profile] denitta.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2005-05-13 12:52 am (UTC)

the look in his eyes wasn't fake anymore, not when he looked at Anita.

And that's what eats her up inside isn't it? You've hit the nail on the head, I think, and in only 100 words. Brava!

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