ext_19888 ([identity profile] beren-writes.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2005-07-05 08:18 pm (UTC)

Brilliant.

Over the last few chapters I want to alternatively hug and hit Anita - which I tend to want to do when I'm reading the books, so Bravo! :)

I do hope she bucks up a bit soon and/or stops being strong before she kills herself or someone else. So like her to reject comfort becuase of guilt.

I want to take Nathaniel and wrap him up in cotton wool until Anita can see beyond the end of her nose, and Micah so isn't helping. Richard is wonderfully Richard in his arsiness and it looks like there's going to be punch up sooner or later (probably a good idea to get it out of their system ::g::).

Poor Harry is being far too Gryffindor and taking it all on himself and he really needs a friend right now. I hope he and Nathaniel can help each other through the trauma that's going on - their talk seemed a bonding method for both of them.

Loved the whole lupanar scene, and the whole Bellatrix bit was fabulous. Harry's reaction was beautifully written as well. I like the fact that Jean-Claude is changing his opinon of Harry because of it.

Well done - great few chapters.

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