Date: 2005-08-03 04:54 pm (UTC)
This was a great chapter on lots of levels. I love his relationship with Jason and Nathaniel. In this chapter, even in Harry's POV, we were really seeing Nathaniel happy at having a brother because Harry is that to him. A friend but more. A younger brother.

Anita is still so fragile. She hates that feeling, hates being out of control. She has intimacy issues even when she's willing and able to be physically intimate. Now, it's all cascading down around her. Ronnie's contribution was interesting and, I think, more jealousy based than anything else. (It was great that Harry answered the door shirtless.) It's a riot to watch Nathaniel play Dress-up Barbie with his life-sized Anita. Jean-Claude does the same thing. No wonders she's always feeling trapped! (Detractors comment on change of attire but don't seem to realize the reason for it.) (By the way, the word you were looking for in the post-Ronnie discussion was polyamorous.)

I can't wait for the next chapter. This story deserves every accolade it gets and more!
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