mhalachai: (Flower (tea_rose))
mhalachai ([personal profile] mhalachai) wrote2005-08-05 07:27 pm

Today's drabbling

I just wrote a series of four drabbles for [livejournal.com profile] abvh100. The challenge is time, but I'm not quite sure this was what I had in mind when I set the challenge last week.

This is a bit of a departure for me. Please go read the drabbles and tell me if my little experiment is received in the spirit I planned?

The drabbles.

ETA: The story's now up on Pomme de Sang, just because.
ETA 2: The story's now also up on TTH, because the world needs more AB fic.

[identity profile] cissasghost.livejournal.com 2005-08-06 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
I think it works. The one from JC's perspective would perhaps not stand on its own, but I think that is probably due to being the one in the middle. As a cohesive whole, though, it's cool. (And knowing how well you write Anita-angst, I now wanna know how Anita's going to react to having been possessed .. )

-Sonya

[identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com 2005-08-06 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I'm sort of sad about the JC one not being stand alone.... but not enough to make it longer :P I thought that the more religious side of AB has been neglected (in my mind) for most of my writing. Time to rectify that.

Anita's going to react to being possessed quite well: therapy, screaming sessions with JC, lots of church, and the occasional paranoid washing of hands in holy water aside, she'll be fine.

.... Oh, I wish I hadn't thought that. Not another fic idea. Nooo!!!!!

[identity profile] penyn-1600.livejournal.com 2005-08-06 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I liked it. I like that it ended with Anita and Richard together.

[identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com 2005-08-06 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I hadn't intended for them to be together in the end, but it just worked out that way. Those two can fight until hell freezes over, but they'll always try and be there for each other when it really matters.