12 pages?! Wow, that didn't read like 12 pages but my Microsoft word says 12 pages too.... I read too fast for my good.
I read over it again and I think the biggest difference is the detail writing.In the first 20-26 chapters details were very frequent. Sometimes un-needed but they were there and it didn'thurt the story. Now the details are still there but not quite as many. The details that are there now are shorter more precise. Your grammar has improved a bit over the thirty-two chapters as well. I think this is the one that I noticed first. Sometimes I love my english class. Overall your writing style has changed just a tiny amount. It sounds moreconfident and a bit more mature.
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I read over it again and I think the biggest difference is the detail writing.In the first 20-26 chapters details were very frequent. Sometimes un-needed but they were there and it didn'thurt the story. Now the details are still there but not quite as many. The details that are there now are shorter more precise.
Your grammar has improved a bit over the thirty-two chapters as well. I think this is the one that I noticed first. Sometimes I love my english class.
Overall your writing style has changed just a tiny amount. It sounds moreconfident and a bit more mature.