ext_54294 ([identity profile] houses7177.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mhalachai 2005-09-28 02:37 pm (UTC)

Yay, I got to read the updates! In short, loving it- loving Dumbles and Anita and Harry and all their myriad issues. Harry's really coming alive in the face of death, isn't he? Like you commented above, a marked man can do anything- and Harry is no exception. He didn't seem overly whiny at all, the right touch of concern and distress, but still that indomitable Harry Spirit.

This was most excellent- and read smoothly. I, too, initially thought that you were indicating that Harry would raise zombies. I see what you mean now, but the phrasing is very indicative of him actually raising the zombies.

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