Inevitable out-take: Hallways (Ron, Luna)

[mhalachai]

Hallways
An Inevitable missing scene

Disclaimer: Laurell K. Hamilton owns all things Anita Blake. JK Rowling owns all things Harry Potter. Inevitable is mine, however.
Rating: PG
Spoilers: While there are teasing hints about 65 in here, it's really a separate entity. Contains spoilers for all chapters of Inevitable to date.
Note: A missing scene. Takes place during the yet-unwritten chapter 65, the day after the Saturday in chapter 64.
- Another Ron POV. I realized that the Luna and Ron dynamic has never been properly examined, and frankly, it needs to be.
- We start with a liberal dosing of Ron/Hermione. I wanted to focus on Ron in this, but Hermione wanted to talk at me a bit.
- Luna may be OOC. She's dealing with stuff that's outside of the canon material.
- 2,608 words.

~~*~~

Through narrowed eyes, Ron watched Harry leave the Great Hall, Luna at his side. "Ron, you're ruining your toast," Hermione said from his side.

He glanced down to see his mangled toast clenched between his fingers. He made himself drop it to the plate and wipe his buttery palm on his napkin. "I'm not hungry."

Hermione laid down her Daily Prophet and turned to him in concern. "What is wrong with you?" she demanded.

"Him!" Ron gestured at Harry's disappearing back. "You saw how he was with Ginny yesterday, all cuddly in the common room, and now he's leaving the Hall with Luna?"

Hermione glared at Ron. "Ronald Weasley, you know Harry!" she said in an angry stage whisper. "You know he would never, ever do anything to hurt Ginny!"

"He's my best friend, but she's my sister!" Ron whispered back, glancing around to make sure Ginny hadn't appeared in the last minute. "Now he's running around with Luna? He's just so stupid with girls!"

"Ron, I'm a girl," Hermione said, trying to calm him down.

"You're not a girl!" Ron said dismissively, tossing his napkin to the table.

Hermione made an impatient sound in her throat. "Would you stop this and tell me what you're on about?"

Ron made himself take a breath, not liking where his head was going. Harry was his best friend, they'd done all kinds of things together, but that didn't change the fact that Ginny was Ron's little sister. He was supposed to be on her side if anything went wrong. He knew how she had pined after Harry in those first few years at school. Now, if she thought Harry liked her, all the while he was going after Luna...

In a very quiet voice, staring at his empty plate the whole time, Ron told Hermione exactly what he was thinking. He half-expected her to be angry with him; after all, Harry was her friend too, and she didn't have any blood connection to Ginny. But when he was done talking, Hermione squeezed his shoulder and kissed him quickly on his cheek.

"Ginny's going to be fine," she said. "And it's Harry. If he's doing anything, it's not going to be because he wants to hurt anyone, it's because he's an idiot."

"That's what I just said," Ron pointed out.

"Yes, but you didn't say it well." Hermione said. She patted his hand. "Luna is Harry's friend."

"But what if she's more?" Ron asked. "What if Harry likes her too?" This whole mess was giving him a headache.

"Then we'll sort it out," Hermione said practically. "I'll talk to Harry when he gets back to the Tower."

"No, I'll talk to him."

"No, Ron, you won't." Hermione closed her newspaper. "He'll react badly, and so will you, and things will be... unfortunate."

"I'm not going to do that!"

Hermione gave him a look. "It's Ginny. You will. I'll handle it."

Ron wanted to argue, but she was right. Like always. He settled on smiling at her. "How do you know so much about me?"

Hermione picked up her book bag and stood up, then put her hand on Ron's shoulder. "Because I love you," she said matter-of-factly, kissing him on the top of his head. "I'll see you later!"

Ron wanted to ask her to stay, to never leave, to marry him, but none of the right words would come, and he just watched her leave.

Finally, he turned back to his plate, to see Neville staring at him across the table. "What?" Ron said crossly.

Neville shook his head. "Nothing."

Standing, Ron hurried from the Hall. He needed to not be around anyone right then. Hermione was going to a prefect's meeting, and Harry was off to see Dumbledore, or at least he had been before he met Luna on the way out of the Hall.

Stop thinking about Harry and Luna! the voice in Ron's head said, sounding too much like Hermione. Just find something to keep your mind off things until Hermione gets a chance to talk to Harry. She'll set him straight. And if that doesn't work, I can talk to him.

He toyed with the idea of goofing around for a few hours, but grudgingly turned himself in the direction of Gryffindor Tower. He had a Transfiguration essay due on Wednesday, that Hermione had unequivocally told him that she was not going to help him on. He figured he could write it and ask for her opinion afterward; that usually worked. But first, he needed to start the essay. It was sunny outside, so the Gryffindor common room should be empty enough for him to concentrate.

~*~

Hours later, an annoyed Ron stomped out of the Gryffindor Tower, school bag slung over his shoulder. Everyone was bothering him! First years sniveling about something stupid, the Quidditch team members wanting to know about the next practice. All he had wanted to do was to write his bloody essay! Was that so much to ask?

That probably meant he needed to go to the library. Ron hated being in that place by himself. He always felt vaguely guilty, like he should be studying more. When Harry and Hermione were there, he could at least focus on them.

Turning down a corridor, Ron heard raised voices off in the distance. He didn't pay them any attention until he heard the words "Harry Potter," said by a familiar male voice, that Ron recognized as Michael Corner.

Ron slowed to listen, his worn shoes moving silently over the stone floor.

"... told you what I would do!"

"I told you that I was finished with this!" Luna's voice replied, with more force than Ron had ever heard her use. "I don't care who you tell!"

The boy laughed, such an ugly sound that Ron let his bag slide to the ground as he pulled his wand. "No one? It won't matter if I tell Potter, but what about Ginny's brother? What would he do when he found out, if his sister hasn't told him already?"

The silence was profound. "Did you tell Ginny?" Luna asked a little breathily.

"I told you I would, and it was even better than I thought it would be," Michael snapped. "Telling Potter's little princess, that her perverted 'best friend' fancied her? She didn't know what to do with her mouth, which for Ginny was quite unusual--"

"Shut up!" Luna shouted. "Don't talk about her like that!"

Ron's head was spinning. He was so busy thinking about what Michael had said, that he almost missed the implied insult to Ginny. Luna fancied Ginny? But they were both girls! Girls didn't like each other, it wasn't done.

Although, there were those friends of Charlie's who worked down at the dragon reserve in Romania, those two guys who were close like that. They'd seemed normal, when Ron visited the place. Charlie was at ease with them both. That was fine, Ron supposed. He didn't know of any guys who were like that in England, but then everyone seemed to think it was wrong, so maybe they'd hide what they were.

Like Harry tried to do with his vampire grandfather.

Michael's snort drew Ron's attention back to the hallway. "Although, Luna, if I knew you had liked boys too, I might have asked for something more interesting than you doing my homework last year." The innuendo was barely masked.

Ron didn't think; he just rounded the corner, wand clenched in his fist. The scene surprised him. Luna was facing him, and as he came into view, she had just finished pulling her wand. She didn't spare him a glance, keeping her eyes firmly on Michael, whose back was to Ron. "That is never going to happen," she said, her voice shaking slightly, but her hand was steady. "You are a bully, Michael Corner, and if you ever even suggest that again, I'm going to hex you!"

"You really think you can do that?" Michael said, although he'd taken a step back when she pointed her wand at him. "Who'd believe why you did it? What would you do, tell? They'd all believe me, over someone like you!"

Luna swallowed hard, her eyes never straying from Michael's face. Ron took a deep breath, willing himself to calm down before he cursed Michael in the back. "I'd believe her," Ron said. Michael jumped and whirled around, a sickly expression on his face. "And so would everyone else!"

Michael's eyes darted between Ron and Luna, like a trapped animal. "You don't know what's going on," Michael tried to say.

"Shut it!" Ron made himself keep his wand lowered. What kind of an utter pervert would try and blackmail a girl with sex? "I heard you, I know what you've been doing, and you're going to stop it!"

"What, are you going to step in and protect her?" Michael said sarcastically.

Forget wands; Ron wanted to punch Michael. "She doesn't need anyone to protect her!" Ron shouted. "She took on a whole crowd of Death Eaters at the Ministry a year ago! She's brave and she's smart and you're nothing!"

Michael stared at Ron for a moment, then bolted down the hallway, giving Luna a wide berth. Shakily, Luna lowered her wand and stared at the place where Michael had been.

"Are you okay?" Ron asked urgently, putting his wand away and retrieving his bag. "That berk didn't hurt you?"

Luna shook her head. "I'm not hurt," she said, giving Ron a tired look.

"Good." He stood awkwardly, not sure what to say now. "Is there anything that you need me to do?"

Luna shook her head and turned her head to stare down the corridor. "I didn't think he'd ever really tell Ginny," she said softly.

Ron slowly crossed the hall, without a clue on what to do. After a minute, Luna looked up at him, her blue eyes wide and resigned. Ron really didn't like that look; it made him feel like he should have been able to do something more.

Something about Luna's gaze made Ron flash back to what was lying under all this: Luna liked Ginny. He'd always known that Ginny liked boys, but standing here, with Luna staring at him, Ron suddenly wondered if Ginny might like a girl too.

That's crazy! he thought, trying not to look as flustered as he felt. Ginny liked boys! Like Harry! He couldn't think about this, not now, not until he'd dealt with the mess Michael Corner had created.

"Do you want to go tell somebody?" Ron asked, wanting to fidget under Luna's stare. "Maybe Hermione, or..."

His voice trailed off as Luna stared at him. "You've changed," she said finally. "A year ago, you would have been different if you heard what Michael had to say."

Ron didn't look away, even though he knew she was probably right. "That was a long time ago," he said. "What's happening is happening now." He winced at how stupid that sounded, but he pushed himself on. "You can't let Michael do this."

"It's not as simple as that," Luna said quietly. "There are other people involved, who--"

"If you're talking about Ginny, then don't worry about that," Ron interrupted. "She's your friend, she'd never stop being your friend because of this!" And as he said it, he realized that it was true.

Luna let her eyes drop to her wand. When she looked back up, the resignation was gone, replaced by something far more solid. "Would you go with me to see Professor Flitwick?"

Ron nodded, relief washing over him. He wouldn't admit it out loud, but he was glad that Luna wanted to go to a teacher. If anyone could set Michael Corner straight, or at least make sure he didn't hurt Luna, it was Flitwick, Ravenclaw's head of house. "Let's go."

Ron shoved his uncertainty to the back of his mind over whatever it was Harry and Luna had happening. That wasn't important any more. Privately, however, part of Ron wanted to run into Michael on the way to Flitwick's office. Sometimes, people just needed to be taught a lesson.

~*~

Sitting in Flitwick's office while Luna slowly and methodically told her story, Ron realized that he had never seen the tiny professor look so... intense. Even in class, with students accidentally blowing things apart with charms, Flitwick had always approached the situation with a sort of resigned amusement.

He wasn't amused now.

When Flitwick asked Luna if anyone else knew about the situation, Ron was surprised to hear Luna say that Harry knew about the whole thing. Was that why the two of them were spending time together? Somehow, Ron would have thought that Harry would be a lot angrier about the situation. So why hadn't he said anything to anyone?

Ron answered all of Flitwick's questions honestly, but it seemed as if the professor had already come to a decision. Flitwick had just started to speak when his office door opened without notice, and McGonagall strode in.

"Professor, might I see you for a minute?" she asked without preamble, looking rather pale and severe.

Flitwick dropped his quill. "Of course," he said, sliding off his chair as if noting was wrong, but Ron had seen that first tiny look of surprise, and dread.

McGonagall motioned Flitwick out of the office to talk to him, leaving Ron and Luna to look at each other, wide-eyed. "What's that?" Ron whispered, straining to hear. Luna only shook her head.

Within moments, Flitwick was in the doorway. "Miss Lovegood, Mr. Weasley, a matter has come up," he said quickly and far too calmly. "Could you come back tomorrow during my office hours to discuss this further?"

Luna stood up quickly, while Ron struggled to his feet. "Of course, professor," Luna said. Flitwick bundled the two of them out of his office, shut the door, and hurried away down the hall after McGonagall. Any other day, Ron might have laughed at seeing the tiny Charms professor trying to keep up with the tall head of Gryffindor, but not today.

"What happened?" Ron wondered.

"Perhaps a Ravenclaw was hurt," Luna said doubtfully. "That's the direction of the infirmary."

Ron couldn't shake the sense of foreboding he felt in her words. "Maybe." He glanced over at her. "Need company to Ravenclaw?"

She gave him a look. "Michael's not going to hurt me," she said. "I'm going to tell him I told Flitwick about what he's been doing."

"He might tell people about.... you know, what he threatened to tell them."

Luna squared her shoulders. "He might." Her voice didn't waver anymore. "But you were right."

Ron blinked. "I was?"

"I can protect myself. He may say things, but I'm not going to let him hold this over me. It's not right."

Ron hated himself for this, but he had to point it out. "It might not just be him being after you, if he tells people."

Luna shook her head, standing painfully straight. "He probably won't tell anyone," she said. "He's a bully, and he might not go on, now that Flitwick knows."

"Luna--"

"This is my problem," she said suddenly. "I don't need someone to protect me. I know what the wizarding world thinks of this, of people who are… like me. I'll just handle it." Without looking at him, she turned and walked away down the hall.

"Do you want me to talk to Ginny?"

Luna stopped suddenly, but didn't turn around. "You don't need to do that," she said, head held high, and started walking again. Before Ron could decide what to do, she had rounded a corner and was out of sight.

After a minute, Ron hefted his bag up higher on his shoulder, and set off toward Gryffindor. Harry was probably still with Dumbledore, but Hermione would be around. Ron needed to tell someone about what happened with Luna.

Hermione would understand and know what to do. She always did.

Ron just wished he could shake that feeling that something bad was happening at Hogwarts.

--fin

Comments

[shadowartemis.livejournal.com]

I definitely think this is my favorite out-take thus far. The relationship between Ron and Luna was brilliantly written, as well as the interaction between Ron and Hermione.

I must say though, I really think this was my favorite part of it:
Even in class, with students accidentally blowing things apart with charms, Flitwick had always approached the situation with a sort of resigned amusement.

He wasn't amused now.

I'm a huge fan of learning more about minor characters and these few lines gave so much character to Flitwick, saying so much in so few words.

Though now I'm rather curious about what happened that required McGonagall to go and get Flitwick...

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it :) I wanted to explore Ron a little more.

I'm a huge fan of learning more about minor characters and these few lines gave so much character to Flitwick, saying so much in so few words.

Me too. This is all from Ron's POV, and he, like most teenagers, probably has a set idea of how a teacher reacts, seeing them all the time in class. Now it's different, and Ron knows why. All part of growing up.

[laney-1974.livejournal.com]

Oooo, I enjoyed this a great deal. You know, I'm coming to love seeing things from Ron's point of view. He comes across as selfish at times in the book, but he really is a good person. A good, loyal person. He just doesn't have a way with words.

I'm also looking forward to seeing what's to come.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Ron's got that Xander POV thing going for him. He's not the hero and knows it, and is sometimes jealous, but it's just part of being him. He's also still a bit young and trying to juggle the things he knows as a boy, to reconcile that with what's expected of him as a man.

[gwionfawyr.livejournal.com]

*woots and cheers, then tries to regain som semblance of calmness. Adjusts glasses even.*

That was a gorgeous piece of work. Luna needed to hex Corner, and then Ron should've popped him on the back of his head for good measure. *calms down again* I liked how Fillius was all Master Dueler resolved. It looked like he was about to go to the dorms and wipe the floor with Corner. Very cool.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it :) I think that any head of house at Hogwarts is going to be a little more openminded, and able to deal with such problems, considering that a) bullies always exist, and in a co-ed school sexual harrasement must pop and and b) can you see Dumbledore settling for any less than the best?

[dvak-64.livejournal.com]

He knew how she had pinned after Harry in those first few years at school.

I'm thinking you meant "pined" - otherwise, beautiful as per usual.

I'm finding myself identifying with Ron, at least the way you write him, much more than I'd expected I would. Ron is what I'm going to call the Blind Watcher - not in the BtVS sense, but he's caught in with things about his friends, and his enemies, and his acquaintances; and while he's often oblivious anyway he ends up stuck in the middle between them, wanting to help and not know how. Sometimes (okay, often), his responses to things around him (Harry and Ginny, Luna and Ginny and Harry, for example) are wildly off course; but they're always well intentioned. And while the road to hell may be paved with such, Ron's not on that path. He's got his friends to ground him - redirect him, maybe.

Luna, meanwhile, is getting much more strong-willed. I like it, it's a good continuation of how she should be evolving in the books themselves.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I'm thinking you meant "pined"
I'm having the oddest image of Ginny running through the corridors after butterfly-wing!Harry, a sword in her hand. My mind is an odd place.

That's an interesting way of looking at Ron. I like it. The good intentions, the more-than-occasional obliviousness, the wanting to help. He's got Harry and Hermione to yell at him when he's being a dope, and he'll do the same to them if he thinks *they* are being dumb.

I think Luna was always strong and just needs to be reminded of that occasionally. But she's back on her feet now, taking charge of her own life.

[booster17.livejournal.com]

Lovely stuff as usual. I've loved how Luna has slowly changed through this series - already, she's a far distance from where she started, and now she's choosing to go further. The fact that it's her choice, her decision seems to be what she needed right now. Well, that and a hulking big shield named Ron Weasley. *grin*

And Ron too has changed. Not actually erupting in anger? I guess it helped that it wasn't a situation directly wired to his hotspot of must protect Ginny but it's nice to see that he can work things through at his own pace. While of course, still being slow enough/tongue tied enough to not say anything when Hermione said she loved him.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Ron's presence was more of a kick in the shins for Luna, to get moving. In one fell swoop, she finds that a) Ginny knows that Luna "likes" her and b) Ginny's brother, who Luna knows can be a bit mean (as she said in whatever book that was) is supportive of her. There's nothing holding her back anymore.

Ron's not blowing up was more because it wasn't Ginny that Michael was protecting, true, and being a bit surprised by the situation. As I said, Ron hadn't been confronted with it before (and most teenage boys' lesbian fantiazies are more "two girls who are hot for me" not "two girls who are hot for each other and not me at all"... at least I think they are. Never been a teenage boy myself.)

[thekams.livejournal.com]

This was wonderful! I love seeing things from Ron's point of view.
His interaction with Hermione was brilliant, and just so normal Ron/Hermione.
I don't think Luna was terribly OOC; as with Ron, she's changed since a year ago, and this reflects that. I'm so glad that Ron was all nice and calm when facing Luna with what he heard Corner say, and I'm even more glad that Luna finally went to a teacher!

Now, what happened that McGonagall needed to get Flitwick? And the infirmary? I take it we'll find out in the chapter, and man I can't wait to know!! ♥

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Ron/Hermione makes me smile. It's safe, happy, and OMG so canon. I have to be canonical in some ways, to make up for the uncanon crossover.

I sure hope we have more Luna in Book 7. We always need more Luna!

PS the chapter is now up.

[ansku]

Great missing scene, I almost liked Ron :) Can't wait to read the next chapter...

[sabriel-0405.livejournal.com]

As always, this provided wonderful insight into the characters growing into their adult shells. Luna isn't OOC because she doesn't get enough stage time in the books. She's probably the best character who wasn't introduced in the first book but she's sidelined. Glad you've put her front and center. Glad to see Ron dealing so well. Pined, by the way, doesn't have a double-N.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I've missed this!

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I do like Luna. She's someone who's the Anya of the books -- able to notice, and point out, the sometimes unhappy truth.

Chapter's up and ready for reading :)

[catherinecookmn.livejournal.com]

Good for Ron! He's not sure how he feels about girls liking girls, but he KNOWS he hates slimy little blackmailers, and he KNOWS that Luna kicked ass in the Battle of the Ministry.

And part of me wonders if a certain Ravenclaw male possesses (or used to possess) a silver dagger...

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Ron's got a great sense of right and wrong. Blackmailers and sesual harassers? WRONG. Luna? RIGHT. Plus he won't say it, but he seems to trust Ginny's judgment in all areas but boyfriends. Luna's still in the friend category to Ron and therefore is A-OK.

Nope, Michael wasnt't the one to set Reece loose :)

[catherinecookmn.livejournal.com]

Oh, and Luna isn't OOC -- or at least you've given her plausible reasons to depart from her canonical behavior.

By the way: I think we're found Flitwick's American grandnieces. (http://www.startribune.com/389/story/385557.html) :-)

[shopteacher-guy.livejournal.com]

Wow, that is the best Ron you have written to date. (well actually your Ron is getting more and more depth each chapter.

I wonder if Harry beat the stuffing out of Conner?? (my bet) that would explain McGonagal's coming to get Flitwick.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I still really don't get Ron's voice as a character. I think it's because he's so much more of a typical boy than Harry. I'm not a boy. Most days, I don't understand boys (or girls, for that matter). Teenagers, however, I understand. Anyway, I try :)

Yay!

[vampiress04.livejournal.com]

Yay! An Inevitable update, I'm so happy. Sorry I haven't been around lately, I was on holiday. But I read all of the chapters, even if I haven't commented on them. They were all great, I love the resolution between Nathanial and Anita. The only thing I would criticize ( sorry ) was Nathanial and the way he was behaving. At times I felt he was a bit OOC, so his actions kept shocking me, I don't remember him ever acting so violent in the books. But, in retrospect, I understand that what happened to him would probably change him, and the way he explained things made me understand the change, so really, when I think about it, this wasn't really a criticism!

Anywho, on to this piece. Lovely, absolutely lovely. I agree with whoever said it before me, Luna simply doesn't get enough attention in the books, but she is my favorite character and I think you write her very in character. She is, after all, sixteen in this story and everyone matures and she is simply maturing, or at least I see it that way.

Ron was also very nice in this chapter, though him and Hermione conspiring against Harry at the beginning kind of ticked me off. Can't they ever trust him to know what he's doing, even though he doesn't? I mean, there are some things he has to figure out for himself, like, what to do when he fancies two girls who may both fancy him back, even though one of them said she was gay? That's a lot to handle without having the older brother coming barreling in with accusations and stuff!

As to what transpired between Flitwick and McGonagall, I do believe it has something to do with our two resident werewolves...I'm not sure, but isn't Reece in Ravenclaw? *scurries off to check*

Re: Yay!

[vampiress04.livejournal.com]

Oops, nope, he's in Hufflepuff...my mistake, sorry! Ok, well, then I have no idea what happened...but from the way Flitwick seemed to automatically sense that something was wrong, I kind of doubt it had anything to do with school business, which can only leave Order of the Phoenix business. And seeing as they were scurrying off to the Infirmary, me thinks someone from the Order got hurt.

Oh, Oh, OH!!!!! Has Remus finally decided to show up, albeit in an injured state? Pretty please! Not to the injury of course, but to Remus showing up. Any idea when we might await chapter 65?

[firefox1490.livejournal.com]

*insert screaming fangirl here* You know I think if you keep on being this great you will have more that me as a fangirl to be dealing with. Well atleast Ron didnt do anything bad he handled it better than I thought he would.

PS. I'm still standing by my Luna/Harry/Ginny threesome comment

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

PS. I'm still standing by my Luna/Harry/Ginny threesome comment

What comment would that be again?

[watcher457.livejournal.com]

okay, what has harry done now? either it's a werewolf thing, he beat malfoy like a bitch, or ginny cursed him into his next life, but i can't see how any of those would involve either a) the head of ravenclaw house or b) be so disastrous that it needs all of the teachers. hmm... voldemort, maybe?

anywho, as for this outtake... love it. it's beautiful that ron was the one that reminded her of how wonderful and powerful she is. coming from ginny or harry, it's what a friend says, but ron... not that they aren't acquaintances, but there's respect there, ya know? And it's good that ron is getting a taste of the whirlwind harry is in the middle of. it's good for him to see it.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

hmm... voldemort, maybe?

Got it in one :)

coming from ginny or harry, it's what a friend says, but ron

Yup. It's important that Luna *gets* him, with all his flaws and his protection of Ginny. That's what makes it so much more important. If Ron's on her side, then maybe she's not alone in this.

[igeria.livejournal.com]

Oh, I am so intrigued - as always. Something important (and violent?) happening off scene - so cruel to your readers! The cruelty we've come to expect & love. :)

But, I have to admit I am worried about Professor resolved-and-already-come-to-a-decision Flitwick. You didn't say what that decision was and I have learned the hard way not to assume I know where this story is going. I thought the wizarding world in this story was not so people-like-Luna friendly? Even without that I just might be worried because you didn't outright say. So, hmmm, even if you did not mean to, your previous history for unexpected twists and turns is keeping me on the edge of my seat when you might not even be trying. Kudos!

[igeria.livejournal.com]

Two minutes of reflection and I realize I probably I am overreacting. But, just dropped back in to say I loved Ron in this.

[(Anonymous)]

That was an exelent instalment. I very much enjoyed it. You make me not hate Ron, which is impressive as JKR totally fails at that and I'm pretty sure that isn't her aim. Yes, Luna was rather OOC, but it works. Now I have one thing on my mind though...what is happening with Flitwich and Minerva to interupt such an important meating? Oh my, I'm all a quiver with wonderment.

[deathinapinkboa.livejournal.com]

One of these days I'm remember to log on before I post a comment.

[penyn-1600.livejournal.com]

I like how you've developed Ron over the course of the story. He's really matured. And that part where Hermione says so matter-factly, "because I love you," and then Neville looks at Ron-that was my favorite part.

I can't help btu feel like the Harry/Ginny/Luna situation is developing into a sort of triumverate or threesome. Like, they all like each other and would be comfortable being together.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Ron's a good kid, and he's growing up.

I'm enjoying the growing links between the second trio. No matter what may come of it, Harry's got a lot of love in his heart and he cares about those girls (as friends, too :)

Great, as usual

[http://users.livejournal.com/_shiisa_/]

Interesting outtake. Good to see Ron is finally growing up: he isn't stupid, just stubborn.

Re: Great, as usual

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

he isn't stupid, just stubborn.

Exactly! That's how I'm taking him in this story :)

[alydhe.livejournal.com]

I love your Ron voice. He's so well meaning, over protective, and clueless. ^__^

And poor Luna! Corner is such a jerk and she's had to deal with that all along? Poor thing. I hope this means she, Ginny, and Harry can now settle down into a nice, kinky, threesome. ^__~

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I love your Ron voice. He's so well meaning, over protective, and clueless.

Oh yeah.

And poor Luna! Corner is such a jerk and she's had to deal with that all along? Poor thing.

Yes. Now she's standing up for herself and is probably thinking of how to talk to Ginny. It's hard enough when your crush knows you like them, but add in all the cultural barriers... but deep down, she knows Ginny's her friend. They'll get through this :)

[jaydeyn-sitari.livejournal.com]

Wow. *blinks* ... *collects brain into coherent thought*

Right, first off: Your Ron is just fantastic. He's showing growth, he's learnt from everything that's happened, he's not a whiny idiot who is there to prop up the action, which is sadly typical of other writers. I love that yeah, he's wigged about the situation but he doesn't even think about walking away or saying/doing something to hurt Luna - he's her friend. That is just beautiful.

Secondly, Luna! Rocks socks! It is difficult to say whether she's OOC here, simply because JKR hasn't given her the depth and involvement that she's got here. Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn! This Luna is wonderful.

And lastly, I want to stomp on Corner's face and other body parts. What a gorram wanker. I do hope Flitwick goes Mal on his ass - throw him out the airlock!

Or... you know, into the lake. The lake works too. Unimaginable bastard.

err... sorry for the language there :)

:)
Jaydeyn

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Right, first off: Your Ron is just fantastic. He's showing growth, he's learnt from everything that's happened, he's not a whiny idiot who is there to prop up the action, which is sadly typical of other writers. I love that yeah, he's wigged about the situation but he doesn't even think about walking away or saying/doing something to hurt Luna - he's her friend.

He's not really her friend at this point. She's Ginny's friend, and Harry's friend, but Ron has seen her in action, knows she's smart and honest and loyal. And that's Ron -- not walking away when it's convenient, but staying because it's the right thing to do.

And lastly, I want to stomp on Corner's face and other body parts.

This wasn't just a plot device. There are people out there who are like this, and if I was going to write a world where differences in sexual orientation are met with fear and anger, I wanted to do it in a way that's not all sunshine and roses. That's not the point of Inevitable, but I needed to have it in there.

Hallways outtake comments

[thymidinekinase.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the Inevitable snack. I do like these glimpses behind the scenes, as it were. I'm a bit ambivalent about this particular one, though. It didn't come alive for me like the one in which Ron, Hermione, and Ginny discuss Harry's possible lycanthropy; I didn't get immersed like I usually do in your stuff. I don't know if I was tired, or if it was a little flat, or what. Maybe it's that I don't have good hold on Luna or Ron, so that there was nothing to pull me in. Or maybe I'm not used to tight third POV on Ron. Meh. Not that it was *bad* or anything, it just didn't engage me like your stuff normally does. Sorry.

Re: Hallways outtake comments

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

I'm a bit ambivalent about this particular one, though

It happens. Sometimes something crackles off the page, othertimes not. I'm still not certain of my Ron voice, which may have translated to here.

[lishel_fracrium.livejournal.com]

wow. I can't help but feel very proud of Ron. loved it!

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Yeah, he's not such a bad guy after all :)

[houses7177.livejournal.com]

A nice, solid outtake. Good arc-let from Ron's perspective and it gives a good grounding for what the rest of Hogwarts is like. They're both from Wizarding families, so their perspective on events is different from what we've seen before. It's also an excellent way to show how much Ron has grown, even since his tiff over Harry's grandfather. He gets there in the end, it just takes a while. And some kicking and screaming.

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I agree, that Harry doesn't really get the Wizarding world and its odd cultural ways.

Damian was the kickstart Ron needed to get him to realize that it's the person, not the prejudice, that matters. It was a good step in him putting his childhood behind him.