Inevitable 13: Pain like icicles on the trees

[mhalachai]

It's posted. The aftermath. Inevitable 13: Pain like icicles on the trees. And yes, it's still Thursday where I am.

OR, if TTH is acting all wonky, at Pomme De Sang

Let me know what you think. Candlelight and Mind the Gap are next in line.

Comments

[sparrow015.livejournal.com]

I loved it!!! Now, should Harry mention someone can go insane from that curse and will he get a big old guild trip and try and run away. XD

Oh, I noticed this on one of the lines...just one mis-spelled word, I'm not sure if yer gonna change it or not, but I thought you should be aware.

"You take Jason and Jamil, having Shang-Day drive," Richard said distractedly as he tried to shift Anita's weight in his arms. "Graham will drive me and Anita and Harry."

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

*headdesk* D'oh. Thanks for pointing that out. What can I say, except that it's really late?

[sparrow015.livejournal.com]

Hey, I understand that, lateness sometimes happens. I loved the chapter, just thought I would point out the one thing that kept pinging in my head. :)