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mhalachai ([personal profile] mhalachai) wrote2005-07-21 09:59 pm
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FIC UPDATE: Inevitable 23:

Inevitable 23: The Parts Of Me I Cannot Hide is posted.

At TTH
(and if TTH is broken:)
At Pomme de Sang
At Skyehawke


As usual, I crave feedback, so let me know what you think. This is a character-building piece, and I like how Micah's developing.

[identity profile] sabriel-0405.livejournal.com 2005-07-22 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
This was such a sweet chapter. I really liked Anita calming down and Micah and Nathaniel and the pard helping her to ease back into reality. I love the ending. As Beren says, ominous, in a delightfully exciting sort of way.

[identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com 2005-07-22 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! It just seemed like the logical way for Anita to act, you know? Wanting to help Nathaniel, poking at Micah, even when she knows she should leave well enough alone. I got the idea of the parallels between Micah and Harry's entrances into Anita's life, the other night, and simple *had* to put it in :)