Inevitable 26: Why Is No One Listening To Me?

[mhalachai]

That noise y'all hear is me cheering that this chapter is done! I typed over 6,000 words today. Again, loves the vacation.

Inevitable Twenty-Six: Why Is No One Listening To Me? is posted.

At TTH
(and if TTH is broken:)
At Pomme de Sang
At Skyehawke

As usual, feel free to comment on anything. I love comments. Of all sizes.

Things I learned in the process of writing this chapter:
-There's an hour less sunlight at this time of year in St. Louis, compared with Vancouver.
-I was strongly tempted to use "British" words for breakfast food, but knew I'd just show the world what a goober I am, so Harry's eating bacon this morning.
-Capslock!Harry is fun to write.

Comments

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Thanks! And you're right about the developing brother relationship. I wasn't planning on it, but it seems to be headed that way. Nate needs someone to relate to, and who is willing to tell him what to do if need be (but not take advantage of that).

Ronnie's reaction was based a tiny bit off the DM chapters... and I simply had to have Harry answer that door without a shirt. All part of my master plan :P

(Detractors comment on change of attire but don't seem to realize the reason for it.)

Detractors to my fic? Or to the change of clothing in general in the AB books?

[sabriel-0405.livejournal.com]

People commented that in ID, Anita was wearing a miniskirt to go to a zombie raising. Anita used to dress to piss off Bert. In fact she still does. But her clothing is better quality, tighter fitting because she's not ashamed to wear it that way and generally more feminine. Anita hasn't lost herself by becoming closer to the monsters. She's beginning to find herself.

(I saw the DM influence. It's really going to be hard to wait until July.)