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I've declared November to be National "Work on my WIPs" Writing Month, or NaWoWriMo. It's sort of like NaNoWriMo, only with more of a lisp.

I've started out well. I hammered together a thousand words for Dawning Light 14, and this chapter is much more upbeat that past chapters, thankfully. I'm done with doing mean (fictional) things to (fictional) children. This chapter is going to be a good one, and we get some plot movement. Fun times.

I've also mapped out the next chapter of Physics of the Spin. I'm not utterly certain that doing a Ronon POV is a good idea as I have never really understood that character, but I'm trying. I'm also going to address Sam Carter's suspicions of Rory (from chapter 11)... I'm a little worried because it looks like Sam might be jealous of Rory and Rory's already verging a bit on Mary Sue territory... so I have to do that delicately. But maybe it's true to an outsider it could be seen like that. Say you're Sam Carter. Say you've worked as hard as you could over a career in the military and in science, and in comes this young thing who's smarter than you without the hard work. Doesn't a little bit of envy cross your mind? Especially if you were stuck in another galaxy for months on end while your former team is falling over themselves for this kid?

(okay so yes, I know that Rory has the potential to be more than bordering on Mary Sue. Trust me, there's a point of some kind to be had.)

I mean, McKay can be jealous all he wants. He's (somewhat) threatened by his own sister's intelligence. But with Sam it's different. Gender politics in fic are hard to balance.

What else am I working on.... Yeah, trying to write Inevitable. Those last four chapters are just stuck in my head.

Those are my WIPs that are going to be updated this month. I might also work on a few one-shots... I've got some ideas. We'll see.

TL;DR: 1,000 words today!

Date: 2008-11-02 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sulien77.livejournal.com
Oddly enough, I don't really see Sam Carter as being the jealous type. Sitting Rory down and picking her brain and then putting her to work immediately on some of the problems they've not been able to make headway with? In a heartbeat. You might want to check out the SG-1 episode "Prodigy" in this regard, this is where they introduce Lieutenant Jennifer Hailey, who is actually as brilliant as Sam and possibly even more so.

Date: 2008-11-02 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feikoi.livejournal.com
Reading this makes me very happy. Also, this is the first time I've managed to make it even close to the 1667 words a day goal, and your post is making me actually complete that! (Granted, it sucks, but its written. :D)

Date: 2008-11-02 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyofluthien.livejournal.com
I think the best portrayal of Ronon I've seen has to be in Starbright's "Lesser Children" on TTH, specifically Chp 8.

Author’s Note: Ronon grumbles, growls, snarls, and grunts. He is the epitome of taciturn, but that doesn’t mean nothing is going on within. There isn’t much canon on Ronon’s past, but there is evidence that he was family-oriented and well educated.

Date: 2008-11-02 05:37 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ariadne83
*points up* What [livejournal.com profile] sulien77 said. I don't see Sam as the jealous type, and I didn't read her that way in the chapter either. I have no idea what a non-Stargate person would make of it, but I think given Sam's position as commander she's justified in making sure there are no potential security breaches.

I think the way Sam seemed to welcome Vala when she showed up on SG-1 is a good pointer towards her not being particularly jealous of people who spend time with her team - in fact, I could see her pulling Rory aside to get the gossip on them, and covertly using that as an opportunity to check out whether Rory is the real deal without letting her know it.

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