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Date: 2009-02-28 01:29 am (UTC)One tiny quibble: "The wide metal door swung open under the young man's touch, revealing a scene familiar to Jarod -- the steel table and draped corpse would have fit in any autopsy room in Jarod's past. However, the young man standing over the corpse was no doctor. A immaculate dark suit gave the air of an undertaker."
Using "young man" to describe two different people (the morgue assistant and Ianto) is a bit confusing.