Date: 2005-04-18 06:00 pm (UTC)
As I said when I read this chapter originally, it was very very nicely done. THe bits with JC were just...hot. How she wanted it to be real, to have some of what she lost. Gah. And JC's reaction was priceless, the disbelief and still pushing the boundaries. Kudos.

The small changes work well, as did the end bit with Willie re Yasmeen. Clever clever Anita, hope it doesn't get her killed.

And Amen on the fashion police. She dressed frumpy and classless when the series started. ANd while JC tended to stuff her in stripperwear, she at least got her act together by the end. Maybe she can go shopping in a future chapter. Oh heavens, I would so love to see that.

Hee!
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