Date: 2007-03-21 06:21 am (UTC)
Yay! More Dawning Light. I was so happy to see this, and it's a great chapter. From a comment you made above, apparently much more is being planned. I am aquiver with anticipation.

Slight typo: when Zerbrowski is talking to Dawn at the end and says "Did any of what happened with you being able to hear what people are thinking sometimes?"
I think it should read something like, "Did any of what happened have to do with you...etc. to make a complete sentence.

Also, cannot wait for this new mystery character.
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