Three dollars and some change

Something that I keep noticing throughout your fics is just how in character the characters are. It's so easy to tell who is saying something/from whose POV something is written when thrown into a new scene.

*happy reader* ^_^

Nitpick: No sooner had Carlos cleared the event horizon than the shield shimmered into existence, and a loud collision hit the shield just [where] Carlos' head had been.