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Date: 2009-12-31 12:41 am (UTC)Two questions, though, if I may?
The man looked at her unblinking. "You are no longer of that world," he finally said. "I pulled you back from the brink of death, gave you life anew in the served of the Lord your God, and you heed His command."
"Served" might be "service"? And is there a word missing after the last comma, or am I just not reading that right? Whatever, you can tell me to get lost, I've just been sitting here mulling it over for at least five minutes (read: analretentivelosergogetalife) and can't figure that one to satisfy myself.
And, um, does NCIS come in for the next chapter?