I love how you've captured Kaylee's essence; she has a very direct voice and seems very honest, especially with herself. After reading this...I just feel morose. And now that I'm rethinking the story, I'm starting to cry. Mhalachai! How can you write something so heartwrenching and beautiful?
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Date: 2005-10-09 01:38 am (UTC)E.A.V.