great chapter

Date: 2006-01-16 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Shopteacher guy here (again)

First I must tell you what a fine writer you are... you are so good at balancing fluff and plot.. amazing. A bit of fluff helps make the tension of the story wind tighter, the characters have something to lose.The whole Jason/Harry relationship (not slashy.. but sorta..kinda) puppy thing.. balanced against the upcoming war/vamp-political intrigue and the looming fact that good people (maybe Harry) are probably going to die.
OH I would have been dissapointed if you had let Anita get all weepy or maudlin, in any way that wasn't mildly pissed off. (seems to me that is the only "safe" way for her to really express herself).
AND I came to the realization that for the first time in his young adult life Harry has something to live for beyond the defete of Voldemort. This alone should be a HUGE help to him, a goal he is already focusing on, he doesn't have to be a weapon for the Wizarding world.
I am betting Ron has grown up enough to accept Harry with little dram. They went through all that "best friend angst". As far as the the vamp relative thing, the Weasly's are pretty progressive for a pure blood family.. Malfoy on the other hand.. if HE finds out whoo-boy. OF course Hermione will just want to hug the stuffing out of Harry and help in any way she can.
Oh my.. I seem to be rambling.. you know how us old folks are..
Thanks
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