Get me rewrite; halp'ed

I'm having to rewrite the last part of my girl!Sheppard SGA story Rosemary; I don't know what I was thinking originally, but the first run-thru had such a trite ending it's embarrassing. There was no resolution, and I didn't even get to have Rodney fantasizing about Teyla and Joan all sweaty and hitting each other with sticks. But tonight, while I worked my other job (invigilating exams for the bore) I wrote out the necessary missing section long hand. I should have that up this weekend. Yay.

Also, help me: There's an SGA story out there where Rodney loses his senses of sight and hearing due to something alien, and the story is his POV as John helps him through it. Does anyone know what I'm talking about? Thanks in advance!

FOUND: Read -.-. --- -. -. . -.-. - .. --- -. by Mad Maudlin

I really need to start bookmarking these things that I read.