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I'm just re-reading the last 10 chapters of Inevitable... why didn't anyone tell me how over the top the drama is?? I mean, it's no more than a Harry Potter or Anita Blake book, but OMG I get exhausted for Harry and Anita just reading this stuff.

Anyway: Question Time

Feel free to ask me any question at all on any of my fics, including Inevitable. I'll pre-empt the one I expect by saying: Yes, I am going to finish the story. There won't be any spoilers, promise. Anything you want to know? Ask it now!

Date: 2008-10-30 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cissasghost.livejournal.com
Eh, there was drama, yes, lots of it, but you'd built up to it. It was honest drama.

. . I can't think of anything to ask that wouldn't involve spoilers.

Date: 2008-10-30 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Honestly, in this story, I think it's better to have the 'telling of things arcane in canon now, so when I whip them out in the grand finale, no one can yell at me for making things up' in action and drama, rather than in exposition (not only because it would be out of character:

Harry: So, Anita, tell me all about the horrible ways you can kill someone
Anita: Of course, because that's so like me.
Harry: Right on, old girl.
Jason: *head explode*)

It's just that being away from it so long, I go back and jump into chapter 70 and everything is a mess. Poor Harry. I should just finish this story and put him out of his misery. Um, metaphorically speaking.

Inevitable question

Date: 2008-10-30 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skeptic7.livejournal.com
Will Anita and Severus realize that they are both trying to protect the students?

Re: Inevitable question

Date: 2008-10-30 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Yes, they will.

When it's just a little *too* late for it to be any good.

It's rather like a greek tragedy...

Date: 2008-10-30 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thymidinekinase.livejournal.com
You said it yourself, it was no more dramatic than an Anita Blake novel. So I reckon we all thought you were being deliberately canon-compliant, or something. It's not that I'd mind if Anita got the occasional decent night's sleep without massive shootouts, spell-offs, duels, bloodletting, or other upheaval, it's just that she never gets them in the books, so... it just seemed consistent, y'know?

Date: 2008-10-30 03:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
When it's read as a whole, the trauma drama never lets up. Starting at chapter one, you get a sense of how things will go (badly) but at least the tone remains. By jumping in at chapter 65, especially after recently writing a lot of NCIS and that Gilmore Girls/Stargate story, the pace certainly is a lot faster.

I've toyed with the idea of writing a story for these two where nothing happens and by the end they're both climbing the walls from the strain.

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Date: 2008-10-30 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deepfishy.livejournal.com
These are not 'verses where Things Go Smooth For Our Heroes. It would be weird if there wasn't high stakes, life-and-death situations crashing on top of Harry and Anita like a freeway pile-up :).

Date: 2008-10-30 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I like the way you put that. I can just see them sitting around with nothing happening and they are both going bug-eyed at the inactivity.

*squishes her crazy characters*

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Dawning Light

Date: 2008-10-30 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ponderoid.livejournal.com
When are you coming back to Dawning Light? Pretty please? :)

*** Ponder

Re: Dawning Light

Date: 2008-10-30 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Soon, it will be soon. I've got the whole story mapped out and I just need to find the time to write it. I guess the same can be said about the rest of the fics, too, but I really mean it about Dawning Light.

(and by soon, I mean I should have something up within a month)

Date: 2008-10-30 03:22 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Any question on any fic at all? Sweet.
In that case, my question is: when are Physics of the Spin and or Dawning Light going to be updated? Soon, please?
I know you just updated PotS (and it was made of awesomeness), but will the next chapter be ready soon? A week, a couple of weeks, a month, several months (please not the last one)? Just a guesstimate would be greatly appreciated.
And Dawning Light? Any updates on the horizon?

Date: 2008-10-30 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm working on the next chapter of Physics; It's mapped out (and starts with Ronon POV, which is *hard*) and is moving. Dawning Light is also ready to move forward; I've committed myself to getting that next chapter out in a month (eek).

Date: 2008-10-30 03:25 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mayqueen517.livejournal.com
Which fic do you think is your strongest and why? Is there a character who MAKES it so, or is it one that you're proudest of?


:-)

Date: 2008-10-30 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
There are so many ways to define "strongest"... If you take strongest story line, I think Agent Afloat Atlantis (http://mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com/tag/agent+afloat+atlantis) moves quite well and gets the story together nicely, and the main character (Ziva) does a lot of growing and development.

Strongest idea, I'd go with Physics of the Spin (http://mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com/tag/physics+of+the+spin), because it's taken me and will not let me go. The threads of the story weave together nicely, with a lot of forward movement (the plot) and lateral movement (character development) and I just love it to pieces. Initially, I wasn't going to write the story because I thought it was too out-there, even as a crossover, but never let it be said I'm not up for a challenge.

(these are the ones most recent in my mind, so if I had to go back and look at everything, I might change my mind, but these are my off-the-cuff comments)

I tend to put a lot of effort into my lead characters, even if the story isn't always told from their POV (an example would be of Anita in Dawning Light - I envision the whole story from Anita's POV, even though the story is told by Dawn, because there is something emotionally powerful for a woman like Anita to suddenly find herself in the role of mother to such a damaged child, and Dawn is seeing her reactions without really knowing what is driving Anita, but I want the audience to see the adult reactions. It's hard, but I'm trying.

I hope that wasn't too rambley :)

Date: 2008-10-30 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ccmom.livejournal.com
okay, I've got one. Are you planning to do any more with "Balancing Act?" You kind of left it with a cliffhanger.

Of course, I'm still gasping in anticipation for the next chapter of Physics with a spin and Inevitable.

I am willing to offer up bits of my soul for new chapters, if you're interested in something an tainted as mine. *grin* hmm.. that sentence made more sense in my head. Off to bed.

Date: 2008-10-30 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I don't think I'll go back to Balancing Act. I wouldn't classify that ending as a cliffhanger, more... open ended.

The three main stories I'm working on now are Physics, Inevitable and Dawning Light - no more small stories at the movement. Writing Agent Afloat Atlantis took the wind out of those sails. And I'm always on the lookout for the next big epic, but nothing is coming at me. Hopefully this will mean I can continue on and finish the WIPs. Right? Right.

All I need is some time to get the writing done.....

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Date: 2008-10-30 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hiza-chan.livejournal.com
In Inevitable, is anything going to come in the form of Nathanial/Harry? It's teasing and all, and I don't expect anything SERIOUS to come of it, but a scene with them fooling around would be awesome.

Date: 2008-10-30 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Um.... well, nothing in the remaining four chapters of Inevitable, but there are plans for a sequel in which the boys get a little.... um, friendly. I don't think I can say more than that.

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 2008-10-30 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dsample.livejournal.com
I just figured you were going for the over-the-top style of the Anita Blake books, and thought that you were doing a very good job of capturing it.

(It is more in keeping with the LKH's style than JKR's, but with less talking about sex.)

Date: 2008-10-30 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
It's been so long since I read the AB books, or even Inevitable, that I'd forgotten how over the top the stories really were. So much happens in such a short time. Poor pumpkins.

(I've always been of the opinion that sex only belongs in a story when it moves the plot forward, and the only way sex would move the plot in Inevitable would be in a very wrong sort of way, and that's not the story I'm aiming for now, so no sex for us (we're British))

*waves*

Date: 2008-10-30 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laney-1974.livejournal.com
To be honest, I didn't really notice the drama or maybe can't remember it. It didn't seem over the top. Actually, I was just thinking today it's time for a re-read of this fic (I think I've read it about three or four times now... I always get sucked in).

Now, questions... Were you ever tempted to make Harry a wereworlf in the "normal" sense? What made you decide to make his beast similar to Anita's?

Personally, I would have liked Harry to have become a werewolf but I can totally see why you would go the other way (man, could you imagine the drama if he had been a true werewolf?).

Re: *waves*

Date: 2008-10-30 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
there's just a lot of things happening in the last 15 chapters or so. There's the Olaf and Nathaniel and Anita thing, then Harry being ripped up by Moroven's vamps, then Jason vs. Remus vs. Anita's gun, and the fun never stops for our boy. Oh yeah, and Voldemort attacking the school a few months early, too....

Date: 2008-10-30 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draconin.livejournal.com
Any thoughts on revisiting Shoptalk (http://mhalachaiswords.com/writing/viewstory.php?sid=65) or is it permanently stalled?

Date: 2008-10-30 03:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I think ShopTalk is done. I haven't been keeping up with Smallville since season 2, and I think I'm done with that 'verse. Which is too bad, because it's a story with great potential... but not for this writer :(

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Inevitable

Date: 2008-10-30 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
"Over the top drama", well I wouldn't say that. Both the Anita Blake and Harry Potter series are built on drama, and done so in a great way. I think the Inevitable story is great and when I checked out your site for updates and saw the Inevitable icon I thought you had updated and nearly had a seizure (in a good way) when I thought you had updated.

I was wondering if we will soon see more of Anita's powers. So far she has posed as a muggle for the wizards and I have to say that I'm waiting in tension for her true nature to be revealed at Hogwarts. I just can't wait to see their reactions XD.

And yes I agree that if there weren't any more drama I think it would drive both of them insane. Anita would probably fully develop her (former well justified) paranoia and shoot at anything that moves.

Also, will there be more chapters soon? (please)

Re: Inevitable

Date: 2008-10-30 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
We will certainly see more of Anita's powers. One of the reasons for the last 10 chapters has been to demonstrate Anita's powers without having to list them, so when we come to the final chapters and all hell breaks loose, we will know what the girl can do. Let's just say that there will be Repercussions.

More soon! I hope to finish this story before the 2009 calendar year begins.

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Date: 2008-10-30 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] internal666.livejournal.com
Okay, so, I was re-reading Inevitable a few months ago when I had an "AH HA!" moment. So I have to ask this question:

Is the bond Harry has with Anita the reason he can't shift like a normal lycanthrope?

I mean, it makes perfect sense, if Harry can... Channel (I'm not sure that's the right word for this though) enough his power through Anita to create a manifestation of himself and hex Olaf, then why couldn't Anita subconsciously send whatever keeps her from shifting back to Harry?

And aside from the standard "wen u updteing Inevitable? i ned plsssssss" question that's all I've got D:

Date: 2008-11-04 07:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Short answer? Yes and no.

Longer answer: Harry didn't shift because he's like Anita. He has that strain of magic in him that's not quite the same as everyone else. With Anita, it's her death magic. With Harry (for the purposes of this story) he's tinged with the vampire blood from his grandfather. He's always been a little different from his schoolmates, being hopeless at some things and also far advanced (like the Patronus charm) in others, and I wanted to tie that into his otherness.

And *that* was how he managed to synch himself up to Anita, first in the woods while she was under the Crutiatus Eternium curse, and then later with those dreams and the Olaf thing. There is more to that, but I'll save that for the sequel :)

And more soonish. I hope. I want to get this story done before the end of the calender year.

Date: 2008-10-31 01:19 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] silverblade219.livejournal.com
The drama is not really that noticeable on a first read, but when I was rereading it, I got up to that point too and felt tired for them. But it feels right for this story...

My question for Inevitable is kind of random, but I have wondered what happend in the year you skipped for Harry. (unless I remember wrong, you skipped the 6th year, right? It has been a while since I've read it). Not much seems to have happend other then to increase the tensions in the wizarding world and Harry learned more healing spells. Any thoughts on the defense teacher for that year? (random question is random...)

Date: 2008-10-31 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I think that upon a reintroduction to the Harry and Anita show, you just feel more for them. Poor noodles.

I did skip year six... and have promptly forgotten what happened, if anything. It wasn't really important to this story. What I do recall was that the teacher was no one we knew, but the kids learned about healing magics; and there was a big year-end clash where Theodore Nott was captured by Aurors and then "interrogated" to death, which was a watershed event for Harry in realizing that the Aurors are not always right, and there are gray areas in life, some things that are never justified, and for a boy becoming a young man in a time of conflict that is a time of horrible realization.

That was the worst sentence ever. I'm sorry. I am on cold meds and there's Halloween tomorrow and I've been reading too much Stephen King.

In all honesty, I just skipped year six because I needed Harry to be 17 and a legal adult in the Wizarding world so I could get him away from the Dursleys. But it's all working out quite well, I think :)

Date: 2008-11-01 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eclecticcollect.livejournal.com
I'm curious about the Angels and Drums series you were writing some time ago. Is any more of that in the works, or will it be left open-ended?

Audio Commentary?

Date: 2008-11-01 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Hi, I hope Im not too late to ask a question? But, are you going to do any more audio commentary for any stories. I really enjoyed hearing your thoughts on some chapters of Inevitable and where you wanted each one to go and the character motivation....So yeah, really interesting to listen to!
P.S. really looking forward to more Dawning Light and PoTS. As much as I love Inevitable, which is a lot! they are my favourite!

Date: 2008-11-02 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liz-ddraig.livejournal.com
Seeing as you said any story....

... I know it was a pretty dark place, but your Firefly/Merry Gentry series with Inara was brilliantly concieved. I'd love to know how it all ends. Especially for poor Inara. I'd also love to know how Merry got her own planet!

Date: 2008-11-02 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liz-ddraig.livejournal.com
Also (if I'm allowed two questions!) what about Candlelight? Raphael and Buffy made a great pairing... and what is wrong with Dawn?

Inevitable

Date: 2009-07-02 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wylah.livejournal.com
I'm not sure what the odds are of getting a reply to a comment in a thread that's so old, but it seemed the best place to put it. I've only just found 'Inevitable' (via Beren's 'Black Magic by Moonlight' where she credits your story as an inspiration) and have spent all my spare time for the last few days reading it. I truly, truly hope that you still intend to finish this incredible fic. It's one of the most profesionally written fanfics I've ever read. Characters, settings, everything is spot-on. I hate the thought that I've only a few chapters more to go; I don't want it to end.

Please don't think I'm pushing for new chapters; the story is yours, and it's your choice when or if to finish it. I just wanted you to know that your work is very much appreciated, and that any further installments will be welcomed with open arms (and embarrassingly fangirlish squeeing).

Many thanks, wylah.

Re: Inevitable

Date: 2009-07-04 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
The odds are pretty high! I get an email for all comments, so I see everything that happens on this LJ :D I'm so glad you like the story. Inevitable has been such a large part of my fandom background for so long (it's been over four years at this point O_o). I do intend to finish. The ending will hopefully hold up to the rest of the story (it's action-packed) and I need to get to writing it one of these days.

And thank you so much for your lovely words!

Date: 2010-01-13 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sentinelhuntres.livejournal.com
Hallo,
I have tons of fun re-reading this story all over again ;)
I have never ever seen or read anything about Anita Blake, and still it makes sense to me.
Anyway *pokes friendly* when are we going to be able to read the end?!!! *grin*
Or did miss it somehow?

Greetings from a snowed in and freezing German village!
SH

Date: 2010-06-29 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Are you still working on the fic? I know that you've stated that you're working on it but come one - it's been two years. Any hope? Ficlets and spin offs are way cool but I'd rather finish reading the major fanfiction first since I don't want to spoil anything. =/

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