Date: 2009-01-01 07:48 am (UTC)
That was great! Thanks for continuing this story! It's one of my favorites!

This chapter was very fun. I enjoyed the different viewpoints. Each seemed unique to their character. I can't wait to find out what occurs further into the story. And, of course, I'm greatly anticipating the meeting between unkown father and daughter. The science elements you've added are also fun!

Happy New Year!
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