AB drabble

May. 18th, 2005 02:52 pm
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Have drabbled for [livejournal.com profile] abvh100: Blade (Anita). Because I love Robert Frost.

For me to work on in coming days:
-Letter Box
-Inevitable (... it's just so hard to get back into this. emotionally draining right now 0o0)
-Shop Talk

love love.

Date: 2005-05-21 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] empathic-siren.livejournal.com
Oh, but we do hope you will update Inevitible soon. I just stumbled across this last night and read all that you've written thus far in one go! Really wonderful. There is so much depth to your characters--you've done a nice job of keeping everyone in character, but also have created your own universe. Bravo. I can understand about the emotionally draining aspect--especially after the last chapter. I can see Harry, magicially exhausted from what he's done to protect everyone--try and slip away in the middle of the night in some sort of misguided act of heroism!

Oh, and speaking of which, I thought Anita's thoughts in the last chapter (about having to protect everyone and trying to make sure everyone else was seen to first) were particularly well done, because Harry would do and has done the same kinds of things. Makes for a wonderful match, which you highlighted wonderfully with that particular literary device. Wonderful! Can't wait for more!

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