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Inevitable Twenty-two: The Things I Ask Of You is up!

At TTH

As always, any comments and questions are welcome.

I'll add more later, but go! read! I'm late for work!

Fun facts: This chapter has four POV changes, and is one of the shorter chapters. I managed to get in some rather riske stuff by the sheer placement of the word "pants". Also, mad props to [livejournal.com profile] _calex_ for pointing out something to me, and making me review Harry's inner puppy.

(in other words, plzR&R!!!1!)

Date: 2005-07-15 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabriel-0405.livejournal.com
Thank you, thank you, thank you. This was great. Very interesting on a lot of levels. And now you have some breathing room as we all read the next HP!

Date: 2005-07-15 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks :)

The ardeur scene in the bedroom wasn't too out-there?

Date: 2005-07-15 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabriel-0405.livejournal.com
Not at all. I did it a little differently in my fic and involved Jean-Claude and Micah. But I thought it was great.

Date: 2005-07-15 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Now I need to go back and reread Consequences too :)

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