FIC: Inevitable 25: Baby's Got Something To Prove

[mhalachai]

Inevitable Twenty-five: Baby's Got Something To Prove is posted.

At TTH
(and if TTH is broken:)
At Pomme de Sang
At Skyehawke

Okay, an all-Harry chapter! I'm kinda nervous about this chapter because I'm insane and am not sure I can write Harry. It's a seventeen-year-old boy who did not live through the events in HBP, so I figure he's a bit softer than that Harry. But it all makes sense for my Harry to do all this.

And yes, Anita will be pleased as punch with what happens in this chapter. As in, she'll want to punch someone.

So pretty please tell me anything you want! About the chapter, about life, about HBP... tell me it all, baby.

Comments

[cissasghost.livejournal.com]

I like it; I particularly like the way you write the guys when they're hanging out together. We don't get to see much of that in canon, what with canon being all from Anita's perspective, but it works and it seems real.

And all and sundry who said Harry has something to prove .. I think yeah, he does, but I think it's more that he feels like he's always playing catch-up to his own reputation than that he wants to be all big and bad. Which I think you've conveyed, nicely.

-Sonya

[mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com]

Yeah, how and why the guys hang out has been in my brain since that little bit in ID when Anita stumbles down into the Circus to find Nate and Jason all tucked in together. So, in my little story, they are friends :)

I'm glad you're getting what I'm trying to do with Harry, even if I'm having a hard time articulating it outside the story. In the end, the only person you ever have to prove anything to is yourself.