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An Anita/Micah drabble for the first round, Ficlette Fiasco I. (master list found here)

Writing's on the Wall
by Mhalachai
Disclaimer: Laurell K. Hamilton owns all things Anita Blake. I am but borrowing the characters for a brief time and shall return them intact at the end.
Notes: For [livejournal.com profile] sabriel_0405. An Anita and Micah drabble, with a theme of suspicion. Set around Incubus Dreams.

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I laid still. Micah's sleeping body beside me kept me warm, but I couldn't stop thinking.

It had been a tiny thing. The pard was over tonight, and Gregory kept teasing Vivian about asking Stephen to marry her. Micah's expression changed, for just a moment, but it got me thinking.

Four months after I met him, I still didn't know much about Micah. Not where he grew up, how many girlfriends he'd had.

I was probably being stupid, but my head rattled with so many suspicious thoughts. If Micah wasn't hiding anything, why hadn't he told me more about himself?
--fin


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A Dawn/Harry/Anita ficlette for the Ficlette Fiasco II. (master list found here)

Vacations Never End Well
by Mhalachai
Disclaimer: JKRowling owns all things Harry Potter. Laurell K. Hamilton owns all things Anita Blake. Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy own all the Buffy the Vampire Slayer stuff. I am but borrowing the characters for a brief time and shall return them intact at the end.
Summary: For [livejournal.com profile] madannekidd, for Dawn Summers and Harry Potter and Anita Blake. Not an Inevitable ficlette, trust me.

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Dawn scowled at the hot boy... no, the complete moron sitting in the hard plastic chair across from her in the cold hallway of the police station. It wasn't his fault that a rampaging vampire had started to go ballistic inside that nice dance club, and on the very first night of her vacation, too. Dawn would probably have been able to defend herself, if the moronic idiot with the sexily messy hair and emerald green eyes hadn't thrown her to the side.

Come to think of it, maybe this whole thing really was his fault.

A door banged shut, and Dawn jumped in her seat. The idiot across the hall made a small sound, and Dawn whirled on him. "Shut up!" she exclaimed.

"Me?" he shot back, sitting up straight. "I'm not the one who got us into this mess!"

Part of Dawn's brain noticed his delicious British accent, but she told herself sternly that she didn't have time to think about that. "What were you thinking, standing in the way of a rampaging vampire?" she demanded.

"It was going to attack you!" the boy shouted.

"And what, because I'm like some helpless little female, you needed to play the big strapping hero?" Dawn gripped the side of her seat. "Any idiot knows that the only way to avoid a rampaging vampire is to distract them, not get all up in their face!"

"Then what was it you were doing?" he said, pushing his glasses up on his nose. "You weren't doing much avoiding!"

"I was going for my cross!" Dawn said, leaning forward. "What were you planning on doing?"

The boy opened his mouth to respond, but his expression changed from anger to something confused, before sliding to defiance. "I didn't know you had a cross," he said, more subdued. "I'm not about to apologize for trying to help you."

Dawn didn't know what to say. Here she was, all aiming for a fight, and he wouldn't let her.

She wanted to be angry at him, because it was easier than thinking about those seconds of heart-stopping fear when the screams started, and the vampire ripped into the crowd. Dawn hadn't brought weapons with her, as carrying a wooden stake in St. Louis was pretty much illegal, and she knew that her attempt to pull the tiny cross out of her pocket would fail, and she would die. Then the boy was in the vampire's path, pushing Dawn away.

"Are you two done?" came a voice from down the hall. Dawn and the boy quickly turned around to the speaker, a young woman with dark hair. She didn't quite look like Faith, but something about her reminded Dawn eerily of the Slayer. Seeing that she had their attention, the woman looked down at the files in her hands. "Dawn Summers and Harry Potter?"

Dawn nodded, and the boy did the same. That name was familiar, Dawn thought, and she tried to remember why.

"Who are you?" Harry asked.

"Anita Blake, federal marshal," the woman said. "You'll be happy to know that no one at the club was too injured."

"What about the vampire?" Dawn asked, unable to contain herself.

Anita closed the folder. "In custody," she said shortly. "Now, if you two will come with me, we need to figure out why a seemingly respectable member of the Church of Eternal Life decided to go all spitting fang on a crowed night club."

"Wait, why us?" Harry exclaimed.

Anita smiled coldly. "The vampire came right at you," she said. "Thing is, we're not sure which one of you it was."

Dawn swallowed. It had to be her, the vampire was on its way at her before Harry stepped in the way. But how could she say that? She didn't know why it had come after her.

She threw a glance at Harry, who also looked a bit worried. Dawn didn't know what she was going to tell Anita, or Harry. All she did know was this: Buffy was going to be pissed.
--fin

Date: 2005-10-09 01:49 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Both are simple genius and joys to read.

I can't quite remember what song the phrase 'writings on the wall' was used in. Do you know?

E.A.V.

Date: 2005-10-09 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabriel-0405.livejournal.com
Both of these were excellent. I liked the first one because I can't wait to find out more in "Micah" and the second because everyone is so very in character. You really make these characters seem like people. Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-09 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks!

The phrase is from "Superstitious" by Stevie Wonder. I thought it fit in a number of ways :D

Date: 2005-10-09 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thank you. I too am very curious as to what happens in Micah... It's something I plan to examine in Switchback at some point, actually. But this means I need to get deep into the story before March.

Date: 2005-10-09 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catherinecookmn.livejournal.com
Micah's definitely Mister Mystery Man here. Yet Jean-Claude and Richard (and Nathaniel, for that matter) seem to kinda-sorta trust him. (Well, it's not exactly as if Nathaniel has much choice in the matter, but still...) Methinks the next book is where all hell breaks loose WRT Micah's role in Anita's life. (I keep visualizing her as this giant key ring, with each key being a person or group of people in her life.)

As for the Buffy crossover: Heh! Lovely. I can feel the simmering UST between Dawn and Harry.

Date: 2005-10-09 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
From what we've seen, Micah is still pretty much a mystery to Anita. I don't think that JC sicced a private eye on him, after he hooked up with Anita... or maybe he did. That might be interesting.

I can feel the simmering UST between Dawn and Harry.
Yeah, they're both so cute :)

Wow...

Date: 2005-10-09 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uten.livejournal.com
A very nice ficlette. Although it has one, huge, glaring problem. It has a huge neon sign and a complete set of banshee screaming keep writing all over it. This is one drabble/ficlette that I do hope grows up into a nice big story as it is simply brilliant. *grin*

You made a very interesting start, but there are so many questions left open that it could become the next "Inevitable". Except with Dawn and the gang added. And I could keep rambling, but I hope you write more of this.. Which is wierd in a way, because the premise is simple and many people could come up with it, you just write it way better than anyone else, especially by adding the fact that Harry's name is somehow familiar to Dawn. See, I'm rambling.. Something is supposed to stop me when I do that.. *hits post button*

Date: 2005-10-09 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
It fits, that it does.

E.A.V.

Date: 2005-10-09 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thymidinekinase.livejournal.com
Ah, the green eyes and sexy accent... Harry's really quite the hunk. Seriously, though, it's only my "disbelief" in Buffy/Anita crossovers that curbs my enthusiasm to see this short turn into a longer work.

Huh?

Date: 2005-10-09 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
While it's a lovely ficlet, and I have to agree it would be *very* nice to see it continued, I have to ask: "UST"? What does that mean?

The Apprentice

Who thinks that poor Harry feels *he* was the target.

Date: 2005-10-09 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_calex_/
*pounces* I loff you. That was just wonderful. Very much Dawn and very much Harry. I love them to bits. *grin* I love Dawn shutting Harry up with the logic. Those gryffindors really do rush into things without thinking. Squee! Much love! (if you hadn't realised by now, I love the mini *g*)

Love the Micah/Anita drabble as well. Poor Anita, suspicious by nature. To tell you the truth, I'm seriously intrigued about Micah's past myself...

Date: 2005-10-09 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I had a feeling that was the case. Those two could just raise such havoc.

To tell you the truth, I'm seriously intrigued about Micah's past myself...

Oh, we all are. We all are.

Re: Huh?

Date: 2005-10-09 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
UST usually refered to "Unresolved Sexual Tension", such as Dawn thinking Harry's teh hawtness, etc.

Date: 2005-10-09 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks :) I'm not even sure how to turn it into a longer work... I do like my big bads to be unique, and I'mm running out of Buffy-verse compatible villians.

Re: Huh?

Date: 2005-10-09 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
UST = Unresolved Sexual Tension

E.A.V.

Re: Wow...

Date: 2005-10-09 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
*g*

Which is wierd in a way, because the premise is simple and many people could come up with it, you just write it way better than anyone else, especially by adding the fact that Harry's name is somehow familiar to Dawn

A lot of the fic premises out there are very simple, and often used, and it takes a master to get the best story out of it. The one that springs to mind right now is "Bridges" by Tassos... Yeah, Xander is Jack's son (SG-1) but the story is just so well crafted that it doesn't seem like a crossover cliche, it feels real.

See, now I'm rambling.

Date: 2005-10-11 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] houses7177.livejournal.com
Harry and Dawn's vignette was charming- and your Dawn voice was perfect. So was Anita's reaction. Hee!

And you're right about Micah. He gives so much but part of me thinks it's as much a distraction as anything.

Date: 2005-10-11 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I just think that Dawn and harry would be great togther, with/versus Anita in that story. If I was finished everything else, I might consider expanding it... but, alas.

I am very curious as to what LKH will be putting in that Micah book, due out next year. Mmm, Micah.

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