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Smoke and Blood On Her Tongue
A Highlander/Supernatural story
by [livejournal.com profile] mhalachaiswords


Summary: There was fire and there was blackness. But nothing lasts forever, not even death, not for Jessica Moore.
Disclaimer: Highlander belongs to Davis/Panzer et al. . Kripke and co. own Supernatural. I am but borrowing the characters for a brief time and shall return them intact at the end.
Spoilers: None. Well, except for the Supernatural pilot, but that was years ago so yeah.
Rating: PG for language
Characters: Jessica Moore, Duncan McLeod.
Pairing: None/Gen
Date: November 4, 2005.
Words: 1,000
Author's note: I've been seeing a plethora of HL/SPN fics recently, and this was an idea that was fun to play with. Certainly would put a whole new spin on Sam seeing Jess in "Bloody Mary".

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Black.

All around her was black.

Jess opened her mouth to scream, but there was no air, nothing for her to breathe.

Fire.

She remembered the fire, taking all her air away.

Jess kicked, fought with the blackness holding her. She couldn't breathe and she couldn't get free and it was going to be like that forever, worse than the burning of the fire, worse than anything--

The earth moved under her, sliding, rolling, then the blackness surrounding her cracked open in an explosion of light and air and sound.

The air tasted like smoke and blood.

"Easy, lass," came a soft male voice. Hands were helping her sit up as she shed the blackness like a snake's skin, a skin she'd long since outgrown. "You're all right now."

"Fire," Jess croaked. "There was fire--"

"I know," the voice said again. He pressed something into her hand, guided her hand to her mouth, and she drank. The water was sweet on her tongue, washing away the ashes in her mouth. "You're in the morgue at Palo Alto General."

Jess dropped the glass. Water sloshed down her chest, cold and uncomfortable. "Sam!" she exclaimed. "Where's Sam?"

"He's fine." The man stepped back. "We have to leave."

"Leave?" Something pounded in Jess's head, something she couldn't remember. "We can't leave, I need Sam!"

"That's not the way it works." The man's voice was soft now. "Jessica, I have to explain something to you. What happened two days ago... there was a fire, but you didn't survive it."

Fire.

Before the fire, a man.


"No," Jess argued, kicking free of the black skin-- no, a body bag. A body bag in a cold steel room full of trays and impersonal walls.

A room where they put dead things.

She put her feet on the ground, bare feet covered in ash and dried blood. The floor was cold and solid. "Is this hell?" she asked, a fine tremor spreading through her limbs. She'd gone to church with her Momma when she was a baby, cut her teeth on the hymnal while the preacher's words of hellfire washed over her.

Fire.

Before the fire, a man.

A man but not a man, cutting her, burning her.


"This isn't hell," the man contradicted. He held out his hand. She backed away, slamming into a cold steel table. "Jessica, you're Immortal. You died, but you came back."

Fire.

Before the fire, a man.

A man but not a man, cutting her, burning her.

A man but not a man, with a honeyed tongue and hell in his eyes.


"Shut up!" Jessica screamed. "You're just like him, you're lying!"

"I'm not lying, I promise." The man stepped closer. He touched her arm and it didn't hurt. She wasn't on the ceiling anymore, her insides weren't bleeding out and she wasn't burning. "My name is Duncan, and I'm like you."

Jess stared at his hand. His skin was calloused, fingers wide, just like her Daddy's hands, the hands he used to fix cars and fences and everything he could to make the money to pay for her braces and dollies and college.

Even though he wasn't really her daddy, and Momma wasn't really her momma, they always pretended and it was enough.

"What do you mean, you're like me?"

Duncan removed his hand from Jessica's arm. "I'm Immortal, like you. And I'll explain everything else but right now we need to get out of here before someone finds us here."

"What do you mean?" The cold was sinking into her bones, another kind of torment after the fire. "No, I have to go home, I need to find Sam--"

"He thinks you're dead, and so do your parents," Duncan pressed folded clothing into her hands. "If I hadn't been passing through town--"

"No, I need to go home!" Jessica hugged the clothing to her chest as if it might actually give comfort in this cold place. "I need to--"

"Jessica, you can never go home." Duncan's eyes were full of sorrow, a pain remembered. "Your family thinks you're dead. And to them, you are. You can't go back."

Jess stared at him. "But... What about Momma?"

Twenty-one years old and she was still talking like a little girl, when Momma could kiss better every scrapped knee, when Daddy could fix her bike's broken wheel and build anything, just for her

But the fire had taken all that away.

Fire.

Before the fire, a man.

A man but not a man, cutting her, burning her.

A man but not a man, with a honeyed tongue and hell in his eyes.

A man who watched her as she died, who laughed as Sam was pulled from the room by the other one, whose triumph turned to outrage and defeat as everything went black and she died.


"We have to go before anyone sees us," Duncan said again. "I'll tell you everything when we get out of here."

Jessica stayed where she was. A thin tendril of anger was beginning to burn in her chest. "Who was he?" she asked.

Duncan stopped mid-turn. "Who was who?"

"Who did this to me? Do you know who he was?"

Duncan frowned. "There was an electrical fire, that's all the reports said. It was an accident."

Jess looked down at her hands, curled around the clothing. There was black blood under her nails where she'd clawed at him, before he'd sliced into her and put her on the ceiling and watched her burn.

She'd hurt him before.

Now she was going to find him and kill him for doing this to her.

Her hands curled into fists around the cloth. She was going to find the man who had murdered her, took her away from her family and from Sam, and she was going to make him pay.

"Jessica, it's time to leave."

Jess took a deep breath, the taste of smoke and blood lingering on her tongue like a promise.

--fin

PS Possible SPN season 3 spoilers in comments!

Date: 2007-10-07 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emony2.livejournal.com
Ooooh. Fab, hon.

Em

Date: 2007-10-07 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks! I;m glad you enjoyed it :D

Date: 2007-10-07 08:24 pm (UTC)
vaznetti: (mary burning)
From: [personal profile] vaznetti
I really like this, and rather hope you'll write more of this fascinating idea! And I have to admit it gave me quite a shock, since I had just sent a HL/SPN crossover off to betas!

I love the idea that Jessica remembers, and will be looking for the demon.

Date: 2007-10-07 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks! I may be influenced by my particular brand of heroine (Anita, Buffy), but I have to think that a resurrected Jess would be out there, kicking butt and taking names, etc.

The idea is percolating. We'll see how the rest of season 3 works out. There may be inspiration there :D

Date: 2007-10-07 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camp-permafrost.livejournal.com
OMG! this is wonderful!
Will you write a sequel? please!!!

Date: 2007-10-07 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it! Not sure about a sequel; the idea sure exists but who knows if it'll develop?

But I like to think that Duncan would have his do-gooder hands full with Jess :P

Date: 2007-10-07 08:39 pm (UTC)
epeeblade: (supernatural)
From: [personal profile] epeeblade
OH, I like this concept. Would love to read more.

Date: 2007-10-07 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2007-10-07 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taniapretender.livejournal.com
LOOOOVE THIS

please write more. I'd love to read about her training, about how she discovers Sam's past, about her reaction to Dean being supposedly a psychopath ...

Date: 2007-10-08 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed this :) I had fun writing it.

there is a certain appeal to continuing this.... and I would like to :) There's just a lot on my plate right now in terms of fics. I start too many things.

Date: 2007-10-07 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlie-jae.livejournal.com
Very cool idea, Oh you must continue!

I like the flash backs to the YED.

Oh please say there is another one the works? hmmm.... ::bats pretty brown puppy eyes::

maybe they run into sam and dean ?

Date: 2007-10-08 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it :) I do have some ideas for a continuation, but we will see how it goes.

But if there is a sequel, there certainly could be a confrontation with Sam and Dean :D

Date: 2007-10-07 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muses-circle.livejournal.com
Oh wow, what an interesting idea! Very different! I hope you are going to write more about this idea, because that scene where Sam sees Jess at the end of Bloody Mary... what if she had been alive? O.o

Date: 2007-10-08 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it. The idea does hold a certain appeal, if Sam had seen a living Jess... talk about a shock to a girl's system.

But we'll see :)

Date: 2007-10-07 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dizzy-lizard.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah... Very nice.

Date: 2007-10-07 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks,I'm glad you liked it :D

Date: 2007-10-07 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cissasghost.livejournal.com
OooooOOOooh. I know both of these fandoms only incidentally, just enough to catch on to what's going on plot-wise, but this is really great. I want more!

Date: 2007-10-07 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it :) It was one of those ideas that struck me and I had to run with it.

And it's always fun to play with characters that have been dead for over two years :)

Date: 2007-10-07 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penyn-1600.livejournal.com
I like this a lot. And the potential for more to come (maybe??). :)

Date: 2007-10-07 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :) Maybe more, there certainly is potential for it, if I can get around to it :D

Date: 2007-10-07 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sixpacschic.livejournal.com
I'd never thought of Jess's death being a jumping off point for this type of crossover but it works. Very good story! It'd be awesome if you continued it.

Date: 2007-10-07 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it :) It's almost tangential to the SPN storyline, but it was fun :D

Date: 2007-10-07 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] askani.livejournal.com
I love how you can make pretty much any crossover pairing work. ♥

Date: 2007-10-07 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thanks :) I do love a challenge and this was indeed challenging.

Date: 2007-10-08 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silver-venus42.livejournal.com
That was awesome! I hope you continue it (with the inevitable meeting between Jessica and Sam of course...)

Date: 2007-10-08 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it :) Oh man, could you imagine Season 3!Sam meeting up with Jess... bad times.

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Date: 2007-10-08 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] houses7177.livejournal.com
*shiver* You still have it, Mhal. Brilliant. What a punch, those repeated lines. YED has no idea what a woman can do, does he? I love the twist with Sam seeing her again. This is just perfect, ashes and blood and all.

Date: 2007-10-08 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Thank you SO much for your kind words. I realized that it's been over a month since I wrote anything that wasn't whining.

But knocking this one out in an hour this AM certainly felt good.

I'll have to remember that particular brand of relaxation :)

Date: 2007-10-08 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deepfishy.livejournal.com
Crossover. So. Delicious. :)

I like the way you've structured the flashback in the story. And vengeful Jess is wonderful! (even if, presumably, she doesn't get to do the actual hands-on venging)

Date: 2007-10-08 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
Icon love!

The flashback was the first thing that occurred to me (well, second, after the idea that "Jess + Duncan = Win"). The memories of First Death returning in little spurts, and the story's really all in that one memory: YED tried. YED failed. Now YED would pay.

Elegant in its simplicity, when you think of it :)

Date: 2007-10-08 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangevisitor7.livejournal.com
Well, I am a sucker for SPN/HL crosses and this was a great start. I hope you continue. Also, You should post this at [Unknown site tag].

Date: 2007-10-08 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it :) I'm not sure about a sequel -- the muse is willing, but my schedule is weak, sadly.

Your LJ tag didn't come through. Where else should I post it?

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Date: 2007-10-08 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kesomon.livejournal.com
This is awesome. OH! OHOHOHOH! Random spazzy idea of glee and shiny. This could so have a second part to it. Have you seen the Season 3 Premiere? *won't say another word without an answer for fear of spoiling*

Date: 2007-10-08 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And yes, I have seen the season 3 premiere. Why do you ask?

*iz kurious*

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Date: 2007-10-08 09:55 am (UTC)
ext_15374: (Richie2)
From: [identity profile] idontlikegravy.livejournal.com
This was just a great idea. I hope you take it further. :)

PS, Mind if I friend you?

Date: 2007-10-09 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed :)

Friend away! (Even though I see if you have, and I have reciprocated) Welcome to the madhouse.

Date: 2007-10-08 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shallanelprin.livejournal.com
Oh that's great. I like that idea. And I also like [livejournal.com profile] kesomon's idea about the blond chick from Season 3.

Date: 2007-10-09 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it! I had fun writing this one.

Date: 2007-10-08 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonsinger.livejournal.com
Holy cow! Such excellent, excellent writing. I loved how you showed us Jess's reaction and how Duncan didn't know anything about the demon. Beautifully done.

Date: 2007-10-09 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) I had fun writing it... especially more than two years after the fact.

(PS I just realized that you're in charge of the Blood Ties community -- I do love that show. Hey there :)

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Date: 2007-10-08 03:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dejla.livejournal.com
Oh. Fascinating. Like it very much!

Date: 2007-10-09 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it :) I had fun writing it. Crossovers are love.

Date: 2007-10-08 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neviditelny.livejournal.com
Oh this, this is good.

Date: 2007-10-09 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it :) (Plus icon love)

Date: 2007-10-11 01:05 am (UTC)
ext_9031: (Holiday - Halloween Boo Pumpkin)
From: [identity profile] ithildyn.livejournal.com
Sorry this is so late! I was away, and just saw you posted this at my Highland Cross comm! It's so good. Well, all your fic is so good, but I really liked this one :) I love you brought Jess back.

Date: 2007-10-16 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mhalachaiswords.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I thought of you as I wrote this one (you're the big HL fan on my flist :D)

And thanks for running the comm, I'm always a fan of HL crossovers :)

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